Reviews for Waiting For The Train
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
It is different... Very good... I cried, why leave, when you could just return the favour?The last lines are really job, but it's sad
Greg M. Schumaker chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
I love it!
Rozlin chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
that was great! i absolutely loved it!
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This is awesome, great work!
Noir Fleurir chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
okay? This was good the last line creeped me out though. good job on this one too though:)
Endowment's Seraph chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
huh. wow. that is a different take. very artistic of you. just remember, death is not the answer, just a quicker solution.~Mel
WiltingBlackRose chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Wow...that was amazing. You're poems always catch my interest.