Reviews for Crimson Tonight
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I loved that, the last line really ends it well. Even in love poems you manage to be cynical and angsty, I like that. Your word choice really gets the point across well.

-Peace out.
Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys chapter 1 . 11/14/2005, u have much talent, i love this lots...thanks 4 mi review again...neways, yeah, this poem was just awesome and it was one of the best i've read_
FantasizedMusic chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Fresh approach to lost, or "dead", love. You have a way with words that is just wonderful. The best moment of this poem was "This eve engraved upon my heart./And though I chain each star tonight/The painful dawn is bound to come." Your rhymes are getting better and sound less forced. You can always add more imagery and meaning though, and my opinion is that imagery is your weakest point (or not enough of it, actually). Keep writing.
DarkPrue chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
That was so beautiful and touching. I really loved this. Keep it up.
liz anya chapter 1 . 8/2/2005
Beautiful. Romantic and sad.