Reviews for Unknown Quantity
blossomed blooms chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
X i like this i love this i live this X
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Wonderful. I love your style.
Toni Berthelette chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I really liked this, very well written. _

liz anya chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I love the last two lines. Very beautiful. I can feel the passion here.
RomeoandJuliet chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I'm sorry but I couldn't help but laugh. But no doubt it was still good.

ps. I have some knew stuff I hope you can read.
citrus scented chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
wow, wicked piece of writing. so cleverly written and strung together- very effective choice of words. i love the ending, i can't help relate.
Kira Deleria chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This is a very interesting poem, with a very new concept, I liked it, keep up the good work. I liked the line "she's still as fesh as daffodils to me."