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Wonderful. I love your style.

I really liked this, very well written. _

*Toni*

I love the last two lines. Very beautiful. I can feel the passion here.

I'm sorry but I couldn't help but laugh. But no doubt it was still good.

ps. I have some knew stuff I hope you can read.

wow, wicked piece of writing. so cleverly written and strung together- very effective choice of words. i love the ending, i can't help relate.

This is a very interesting poem, with a very new concept, I liked it, keep up the good work. I liked the line "she's still as fesh as daffodils to me."