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![]() ![]() ![]() X i like this i love this i live this X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. I love your style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this, very well written. _ ~*Toni*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the last two lines. Very beautiful. I can feel the passion here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but I couldn't help but laugh. But no doubt it was still good. ps. I have some knew stuff I hope you can read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, wicked piece of writing. so cleverly written and strung together- very effective choice of words. i love the ending, i can't help relate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very interesting poem, with a very new concept, I liked it, keep up the good work. I liked the line "she's still as fesh as daffodils to me." |