Reviews for closet monsters
Rozlin chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
another odd one but great immagery...
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Listerine, like everyone's said is good. 'ii. dream real(ity)/lsd beautifully.' can't be rivalled though.
like a lover chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
wicked & insane. in the most powerful, too-good-to-be-true way possible.
Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Ah very clever! Is that "so beautifully" as the ending? very VERY clever! **applauds** One of the best i've read so far :)

ps: mind if u read mines someday? thanks a million-

i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
ah! words do not come! i would quote something here but it would be the whole thing. "bolded and italicized for emphasis" smirking like listerine, hovering like a kutzu, gouging out souls with rusted knives...jiminy cricket. this made me shiver. simply wonderful.
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
The listerene reference (i can't find the rights words at this hour) was really cool. I love the imagery, as usual. And the ending was nice, too.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
the ending is gorgeous and continuely this piece blows me away. wonderfully done!

~* noelle
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Nice use of the "film" simile and imagery.
UndueReality chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
Wow. What can I say besides...I LOVE IT. That takes some passion to write like this. Keep up the AWESOME WORK! And maybe read some of mine if you have the time? Just a suggestion.
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
perfect ending. it actually seems to make sense...almost.

"he smirks like listerine and it burns just the same" wow.