This is a very nice subject! o_o; I have never really read anything like this before! Good job! Write on!

hehehehe_, that made me laugh for some twisted reason, thanx for the review!

this is really...depressing could be the word but i dont think it is.

its like a slap in the face that you want again and again. sweet pain & misery! haha!

nicely done. liked the last three lines. k/w~shadowofyou~