Reviews for Distortions of Reality
derisive snort chapter 1 . 1/15/2006
I am Intrigued. Wow this is very well written. YOu have a very realistic and in the moment writing style. Thsi is just awesome. I hope you update soon.
heart-like-a-hand-grenade chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
I love it. Very descriptive without causing a loss of interest. You're a good writer, I can't wait to read more.
Pink Plastic Fire chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
I can relate to a lot of that.M, waking up to yesterday's schoolwork.
JCPD chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Sure, if you could call the collision of random archetypes plotting the death of each other a family.

brilliant.

I always love the way school bells sound. They remind me of closure. Something final. Making up your mind. All the things I can’t accomplish.

genius.

any more words from me would just water down the meaning of the review; to praise a truly exceptional piece of writing. i hope to see this story expanded upon, it's a wonderful start.

p.s. i'm adding you to my 'favorite authors' list.
Kyrsten chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
You have a great way of writing...This looks interesting. Update soon please!
lackluster chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
i really do love the ending. 'click' just says it all!

very abstract and oh-so obscure in many ways, but i love that.
addie pray chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
This was well written. The descriptions and characters, even if only mentioned briefly, were wonderful. I love the abstract tone and how you describe Josh's death as well.

Click.

I love it.