|Reviews for snakesign|
| pennydeath chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
This one's gorgeous - makes pictures, beautiful ones.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Rivulets of tender beauty.
| INTP chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
I like the way this reads; you start in the middle of the action and the narrative just charges through all of this spending emotion. Your language and metaphors are stunning as well. I like the evolution of this person's "sight" (but I would guess it is the way they are experiencing the world through senses more physical than that): how s/he goes through shadows to rainbows to pure light. It's really quite striking!
| linaeve chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
interesting narrative-i loved the intricate detail and captivating imagery. i especially adored "makes a rainbow mockery of me".