Reviews for You Promised
Martin Peterson chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
I especially like your use of the word "Darling" at the start of the second stanza; very clever. I can't decide whether it shows scorn or confusion.

The poem itself needs a little bit of tweaking, but is essentially very good. The last couple of stanza's are very good indeed and it leaves the reader questioning what it is the other person didn't tell.

Matt
myno chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
Good poem. You're right, FP is missing a few sections- hate, happy, and for your review- your profile says you were born in December 1990. I was born in January of the same year. So i am a bit older than you, but the difference is probably not in actual age. I've spent most of my life in countries where I cannot speak the language, which forces me to spend most of my time alone thinking. It made me grow up faster than i would have liked... And, well, a few years back I was a messed up kid, anorexic, suicidal, self-harming and abused. Somehow overcoming those issues made me mature very quickly. But thank you for the reviews. You are quite a good poet; your style will develope more as you ,myno
miss-blackhair chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
lol.. its nice to read.. i enjoyed.. )