|Reviews for seduction with a menthol aftertaste|
| rooftopboys chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
| daniellegypt chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Great phrase, loved it. It was sexy, just the right amount of vulgar, and not cliche.
| Camelia Sinensis chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
it was gorgeous.
like she doesn't care what he does to her - she shouldn't anyway.
| forgottenlife chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
I love the end, seems like every on the wild side couple.
| frailty chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
Oh my I completely love this one... I can relate and four letter words speak much truth.
| luv me like no other chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
This is amazingly written. i really love it.
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
you always said love was the 'half-glass-full'
way of saying lust, but i say it's just a
way of saying fuck (passionately).
oh, that was perfect. finished the poem beautifully. i have... literally no criticism :P xx
| none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
i am in love with this poem. it's so gritty and seductive. if this poem was a person, i would be helplessly captivated. it sounds & tastes & smells like pure(ly tainted) summer.
| Jezsh chapter 1 . 12/7/2005
this is such a sexy poem made even better by the little snatches of humour or irony. I'm just taken with the ideas within it, because I think it's so full of life.
| elvenstorm chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
Wow, just got to love the power of this poem. Must be the best last line... well in a very long time.
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
Holy shit. I love the last four lines.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
for some reason this made me laugh... the ending i mean... it was rather amusing...
| betweentheshadows chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
Great poem and vivid descriptions. And I love the last part, such an interesting last thought. :)
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Another great piece. I love this and so relate..this is going onto my favorites list. Great job. I especially love the first six sentences and last four, too.
| pneumothorax chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Good, positive but almost saddening ending. Brilliant poem.