Reviews for Evil Incarnate
KittyKMae chapter 1 . 2/22/2002
Okay, your story's all right; it's nothing exceptional, but maybe you're just having an inspiration-less day...or it would be, except that there is no explanation, no plot, nothing. It's a nice little scene, but this isn't really very good. Expand on the idea. (I'm sorry if I've offended you, because I'm not trying to. I'm guilty of this, too, LOL. Most people are.)
Aurora Thyme chapter 1 . 2/20/2001
Eek! *looks quikly around* That was a very good story... a likkle freaky... a likkle um, well, scary... Um, i really hope i never see anything ANYTHING like that when I wake up *hides under covers* I would certainly die of fright! Nicely written. If you wanna read more horror (nothing like this) Read "Safari Joe" by, um... i think RD, either that or Revenge... o_O have a nice, happy, sunny, bright day, or week! Ya need it!
megan chapter 1 . 2/2/2001
finish it. you've described what he looks like, as the assignment said, but what happened next? Why was the person there? What sort of tricks and traps will occur with lucifer involved?