Reviews for untitled
sarah1491 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Wow! I love this poem! It's really unique... the actual story it tells is. :)
coffee-shop-blues chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
I really like this poem...along with all your others. I like the way that they are quite short, but always get their meaning across perfectly.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
i love the last line... it's great.. well written
ArchAngel07 chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
This one i like even more. it reminds me of a bunch of my poems and its wonderful, keep writing, a!
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I really like the attitude in this, accepting what has happened and moving on, without self-pity or regret. Similar in a way to the other poem, "Wounds" that I just read.

I do think that your use of punctuation could use some work in this particular poem, but other than that, I really like it.
Venustas iaceo chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I liked this but you need to work on where you put those periods.
ATH-dreams chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
This was really good. It is really a mature peace .

~aware!~