Reviews for Public Breakdown
Fairy in Black and White chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Wow, very powerful. And the style is unique. Excellent poem. I love the rhyme and the way you go back and forth from inner thoughts to others' questions and comments.
Kali Aja chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Awesome poem, actually had some sort of rhyme scheme.

Keep writing