Oh, I've seen shorter chapters in published works. Keep up the good work!

Wow, it's only the first chapter and I love the story already! :D

hey I'm really liking your story so far. This is my first time reading a story with Black lead characters (me being Black and all). and I can relate to the ultimate virgin thing. haha.

unrequited love is the worst ever.

I'm glad Melissa has someone that likes her in return

looking forward to the rest of this story and the sequel.

OMG WOH :D I LOVE THIS :DD

.god.

NO THAT..THAT CANT BEE

NO NO NO THEY CANT GET TOGETHER !

CHRIS AND MELISSA FTW !

:O NO

NO NO NO NO

NO MELISSA DESERVES FRIENDS WHO DOESNT LIKE DARYL :(

oh...god...

Cheryl you bitch man '

LOVING THE STORY :)

:D

i dont want them to be together '

i know its weird but i dont _'

:)

haha...dude, i'm 20 and i've still never held hands or been kissed. i have honestly never had any type of romantic relationship with a guy. maybe youre writing this story about me!

hey this is a really good story i usually dont find stories about african american characterrs, jus white or asian ppl. it stood out to my that she was not a stick figure, that she had a ffigure[: i love stories that r real and not jus fiction. good job now im moving on to ur sequel[

wow this is such a long but good story .

I really like the story so far, even if I think that Melissa should dump Daryl and go out with Bryan but that is another topic. The thing that I want to know is why isn't Melissa as torn up about lying to her dad on a daily basis as she is cheating on her boyfriend? Why does she feel less guilt for one than the other?

Oh my god, my birthday is August 23rd! (And 22nd, seeing as to how I was born at midnight, and plus the fact that they wrote 22nd instead of 23rd, but...yeah)...