Reviews for The Ultimate Virgin
Carolina Martinez chapter 8 . 1/25/2013
Oh, I've seen shorter chapters in published works. Keep up the good work!
Carolina Martinez chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Wow, it's only the first chapter and I love the story already! :D
Sapphire Star328 chapter 9 . 5/13/2009
hey I'm really liking your story so far. This is my first time reading a story with Black lead characters (me being Black and all). and I can relate to the ultimate virgin thing. haha.

unrequited love is the worst ever.

I'm glad Melissa has someone that likes her in return

looking forward to the rest of this story and the sequel.
elisieepee chapter 36 . 1/23/2009
OMG WOH :D I LOVE THIS :DD
elisieepee chapter 35 . 1/23/2009
.god.

NO THAT..THAT CANT BEE

NO NO NO THEY CANT GET TOGETHER !

CHRIS AND MELISSA FTW !
elisieepee chapter 31 . 1/23/2009
:O NO

NO NO NO NO

NO MELISSA DESERVES FRIENDS WHO DOESNT LIKE DARYL :(
elisieepee chapter 27 . 1/23/2009
oh...god...

Cheryl you bitch man '

LOVING THE STORY :)
elisieepee chapter 26 . 1/23/2009
:D
elisieepee chapter 16 . 1/22/2009
i dont want them to be together '

i know its weird but i dont _'
elisieepee chapter 6 . 1/21/2009
:)
rina chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
haha...dude, i'm 20 and i've still never held hands or been kissed. i have honestly never had any type of romantic relationship with a guy. maybe youre writing this story about me!
julieell093 chapter 44 . 3/2/2008
hey this is a really good story i usually dont find stories about african american characterrs, jus white or asian ppl. it stood out to my that she was not a stick figure, that she had a ffigure[: i love stories that r real and not jus fiction. good job now im moving on to ur sequel[
xxily4everxx chapter 43 . 1/24/2008
wow this is such a long but good story .
the-ryter121 chapter 24 . 12/1/2007
I really like the story so far, even if I think that Melissa should dump Daryl and go out with Bryan but that is another topic. The thing that I want to know is why isn't Melissa as torn up about lying to her dad on a daily basis as she is cheating on her boyfriend? Why does she feel less guilt for one than the other?
claretmadeira chapter 4 . 11/13/2007
Oh my god, my birthday is August 23rd! (And 22nd, seeing as to how I was born at midnight, and plus the fact that they wrote 22nd instead of 23rd, but...yeah)...
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