Reviews for The System Works!
Awaking kills the Dream chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Heh, great piece about death. It kinda reminded me about Beetlejuice if you've seen it :P (it's a great film :P)

Awaking kills the Dream
Plinky chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Lol, great start!

Good description of the grim reaper!

"Enough neon lights to make a blind man dizzy" Lol, brilliant description!

Lol, "My eyes, my eyes" "My nose, my nose!"

Goats roamed free!

Dandelions, a goat and a spatula! may have to do some experimenting...

Lol, hilarious piece of writing, unbelievably random! I'll have to remember not to ask if it is the office of the newly departed. Thanks for the advice!
The Angel of Acquiscence chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Seriously, I haven't laughed so much over a story in FictoinPress in ages! It's extremely imaginative and original, and I love the casual tone you used. It cracked me up a lot. Keep writing, and good luck!

-Tye
Squidge VR6 chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
Hehehhehehhehee... very very very funny, very well writtne, excellent! I LOVE it! It's awesome! Great idea, excellently written, AWESOME ending! Really excellent! Hehhehehehee, one of my very fav stories! _
TheOneAndOnlySammy chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
HAHA I love that story! It was hillarious and a great way to look at death. It was so imaginative, I hope there will be more. .:Sammy:.
Four Minute Warning chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
Reminds me of Yu Yu Hakusho...xD I like it. It amused me.