Reviews for Deadly Seizure
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/30/2005
'Toxic dreams, my friends.'I like that one. Very nice.
ThisCut-UpAngel chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
*sits in shock* this is so powerful! Amazing piece!
Yuki Satu chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
wow, thats written pretty neat.
Jen calculates chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Makes me want to hear what it sounds like now...

Very nicely written. ~ Jen
youzi chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
what an innovative way to direct the flow of this poem! i really liked how you tried to dictate how each line should be read..very fresh keep writing D
jeek chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
wow, this is REALLY good. i love the flow and the way the words work together. i just wish i could hear the music.