Reviews for Nightmare on Paper
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Wow, this is so amazing. I love all of the feeling in this.
a moth in lace chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
I like this- it's sweet and casual, and I like that.. It's like it put a few questions in my mind, but it answered them throughout the poem. I really like the ending, too. :)


(PS, thank you so much for all your reviews... I would have reviewed back sooner, but, you know, I'm a lazy bum like that. :) )
Roselillie chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
Wow thats wonderful. I love it! Awsome poem! Keep it up!
Jessicka-scab chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Wow! This almost makes me cry! You describe the feelings so eloquntly and powerfully, and the line 'I speak to a god that never speaks back' and the ending are both perfection. PlusI can totaly relate. So write on :)!
Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Beautiful in its vivid description of anguished desperation. You continue to impress me with your work.
broken223 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
gorgeous...i love the line "I speak to a god that never speaks back". sad yet beautiful
flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Wow that was gorgeously written. Kudos

Venustas iaceo chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Oh... Pretty but horribly sad! Oh well... It's good.
Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I called myself God, yet I am unable to do anything... I'm so sorry. I am so sorry that I can not take away your pain.