|Reviews for Downtown|
| Burning Moon chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
i love it. the only thing is i think the rhythm would work better if you made it
"playing ourselves our on that silver screenlaughing and crying in every *single* scene . . ."
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Love the underlying spiritual feel here. Nice.
| SCatharsis chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
*is breathless*Wow...You know, yours are the first poems I've tried on i-net and thank my aunty in texas I did.I have one question though, do you use inspiration from stuff you read? 'Cause I swear I recognised some things from this poem, or is that just me? Please tell me!SC