Very sad, but you've captured the essence of what I try to stop every day! I'm not Christian, but I'll defend them if people gang up on them.

I like the way this poem was written. I gets the point across very well.

Normally religious poems offend a lot of people. This one, however, does not have a hint of religious bias. Did you step lightly ?I think you hit the nail on the head with this poem.

I like this, I like this a lot. It really shows what society is like today. It's really sad when people, myself included, when we act this way and try to conform to everyone else, especially when it comes to religion. Great piece.

Hehe, nice stuff. Except I don't know any Christians personally who try to force others to "conform." It's our responsibility to express faith to others, not shoving it down people's throats. I see far more Christians attacked for having the nerve to not conceal their deep-seated beliefs than anyone. Of course, I know you didn't mean the conform line like that...it's just taken by many as us forcing them to believe.

This is so right on about life, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.