Reviews for Skater Señor Blanco
Haemamtite chapter 17 . 1/11/2006
Its really gd. uve got me hocked wen i shld be revising *sigh*, wot 2 do! neways, plz keep writing this. thnx
miss-hyperactive chapter 17 . 1/10/2006
another skate story...? aweseome!... ok ok i'm really tired right know.. (aka T.J. at the moment) so... ya i don't want to snap so i'm going to go sleep like no tomorrow... that makes no sense... new story sounds awesoem.. can't wait for up coming updates!:
BOOMandImInControl chapter 16 . 1/5/2006
That is awesome! Please update soon! I hope TJ and Shaun get closer, Sarah is right they would make a good couple!
BITT3RSW33T chapter 16 . 1/5/2006
TA DA! I'm the 35th reviewer! YAY! lol ne wayz, good chapter, but the thing i disapprove is the part where you go "the team's gotten use to me, etc." ok, let's admit it, as a writer, you want to do that A LOT(that's what i do too) BUT, nonetheless, it's best if you SHOW it in little incidents, THEN you go "the team's gotten use to me, etc. whater." GEt it? Just some advice, you don't gotta take it, and btw, LUVING it so far, and plz add some romance:D
Katie chapter 16 . 1/4/2006
You don't know how long I have been waiting for you to update this story! I've basically been checking back every day since Dec. 2nd to see if you added on another chapter. This is my favorite story on this site by far and I will review 35 times myself just so you can get another chapter up! Please update soon!-Katie
miss-hyperactive chapter 16 . 1/4/2006
its not that short but it was cool... can't wait for the next chapter!
BITT3RSW33T chapter 15 . 12/8/2005
BON BON BON! but here's sume tips, try to end all your chapters with cliffhangers
BITT3RSW33T chapter 14 . 12/8/2005
ok, on 2 the next chappie
rainforestorei chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
((brotherhood author))

ok... educate me.

i need the name of the tricks... a detailed description, and anything else you want to add... thanks
Haematite chapter 15 . 12/2/2005
plz plz plz plz plz write more, its really gd n i'm really in2 it. do u think that mayb the other girl (not TJ or Sarah) aught to get off with another guy in the attempt to make Shaun jealous n then get bitchy and upset wen he doesnt react. just a thought. nywyas, plz write more. thnx
Haematite chapter 14 . 11/29/2005
plz plz plz pzl update, im really getin into this. nyways i gtg, speach and drama lesson. tata, plz update. thnx. aml darlin byex
rainforestorei chapter 14 . 11/28/2005
amazing story. i dont know anything about skating. i really dont. this is the person who wrote the brotherhood jacket story by the way. you could help by educating me, because i have no idea what to do with jason now. he is actually my boyfriend and i would feel pretty stupid putting him into a corner.
miss-hyperactive chapter 14 . 11/28/2005
HOW COME IT TOOK YOU SO LONG TO UPDATE... I LIKE THIS STORY... HURRY UP I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!:D
advaba chapter 13 . 11/11/2005
You should concentrate more on the storyistead of the characters. i have them pretty MORE CHAPTERS!wow I'm like a schoolteacher!
Anonimos chapter 2 . 11/4/2005
right on
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