Reviews for Huginn and Muninn
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Beautiful imagery. The rhythm could usually be improved, where it's not great, just by adding another word or syllable. For instance, in the 3td stanza from the end, the last line could become 'and the wind bears out the brunt'; or the penultime line of the poem could describe a 'misty, greying sky'. But that might just be me,lol! This generally flows beautifully, and I love the atmosphere and language. Great piece overall.
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Hurray! The Ravens!
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
I love the imagery. You always weave nature to match your mood, so unique about you.