|Reviews for We Never Guessed|
| getiton65 chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
dont stop writing mercy house just because you can't be bothered with it, and I know thats the reason because you update all the time, and are not too busy to write it. Remember if you wanna be a great writer some day, great writers do not give up on their work after one slight case of writer block. Try harder. Do better. Push yourself - you'll never reach your best because you gotta keep getting better. Now, go - update mercy house.
| flora downs chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
we never guess things will change... like we never seem to think that an orchestra begins its performance to reach the end
i love this poem
it seems to be a foreshadow of my life
i can see it unfolding, different people, different faces, same situations
great way of tying it all together
| ThatGirlInBlack chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
Beautifully sad it reminds me of how I had felt about a friend of mine in the past. Great job!
| a moth in lace chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
It could have been a better poem, but the emotion and the meaning broke through very clearly. This has happened to me. It's very disastrous and terrible to go through... I hope you prevail through all of it.