Reviews for Toxic
xxchar16xx chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Wow . . . I don't know what to say . . . it's so dark, but I think that everyone can probably relate to at least a part of it in sometime of their life.

I thought it was an excellent poem though . . . you are very talented.

I'll get to reading more of your stories soon!
Freedomrider chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
This one made me cry. It reminds me of how I feel.
Peter Harrison chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Well, I'll say, a very sad poem indeed. I did really enjoy the rhythm though (probably because it reminds me of one of my own rhythms that I use constantly) and the rhyming was excellent, not forced at all like mine usually is. Good flow too, not too rushed or too slow, just right, I really liked this poem, even if it did make me sad...
FreezingFire chapter 1 . 1/20/2006
Oh my God... that's wonderful. Horribly grim and depressing. It's like a diamond tear: exquisite, yet so immensely sad.
Ryan123 chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
hey this poem was extreamly well written, i loved it. i'm amazed on the rhyme sceems. i applaude you
CeeDeeJay chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I love it. keep up the writing and i look forward to reading more Dee
Iren chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
That is one of the best poems I have ever read. I like how you made it rhyme and still sound so good D You're such a talented writer.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Woah, nice rhythem, awsome rhyming, and very dark thoughts. Great job, I love it! Keep it up!_
your sweet suicide chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
OMFG this is one of the greatest poems ive ever read, i love you.