Reviews for Unforgiven
S0ulSearching chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
IT's sad...I guess its true though. Nice job, espeically with all of the metaphors and imagery. Keep it up _-pammy-
Calibrated Addict chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
I like's interesting and different. I rarely read dialogue in a poem (maybe I just need to read more?). The first six lines make a point, but they don't feel like they tie in with the rest of the poem - of course the ending wraps them, but they still feel seperate to me. Keep up the good work : )
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Deep, and well-detailed. I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.