Probably soiled my pants at #2 on your "Asshattery" list, I've always wanted to do that in elementary school... wait, kids play kickball in highschool, too? What? As for character interactions, it seems that Lucky wants (knowingly or unconsciously) to be more involved in helping people with their problems... probably just doesn't know it, yet, still acts pissed when called for duty. But yeah, he still fits that "little brother" stereotype in this story. And as for Tomo, well, you never know anymore, do you... actually, I should be asking myself that question... YOU'RE the author, anyway.

Oh no... Terrible timing as always!

This story always makes me laugh. Keep it up :)

- J

Good fuck. I haven't read for so long, I had to go back and reread chapters I apparently had already read and reviewed but had no memory of ever doing so. And so much did I enjoy this that I stayed up until the crack of dawn reading. Totally. Fucking. Worth. It.

Enough of my sleep-deprivation-induced-ranting-slash-all-around-incoherency-and-gibberish. Have a good one. Can't wait for more.

Oh, I think might be a bit Cricket jealous!

Wonderful chapter as always,

- J

I like this story and gave up two seconds of my life to express it.

This is like a birthday present for me! Seriously, you updated the day after my birthday and it makes me hate you less than the previous chapters have. There's a cute playfulness that runs through this chapter that makes you feel like everything is going in Lucky's favor, and while that usually blows in other books, this is so long in the making that it's like you can step back, clasp your hands and say, "Finally!" in a sigh of relief.

I'm so fresh off of reading this that I can't pick out anything that really, really irks me, but I definitely like this interim of 'I like you, do you like me?' that you introduced. We're all hoping for Lucky to end up with Cricket, and with how hard he's crushing there's going to be a gigantic cheer when they kiss or share requited feelings for each other, but hell, if he doesn't? Sure, we're all going to be pissed that Simon the douchebag won but if it happens then we can all sit back and be like, 'Well at least it was a good ride getting here.' But at the very least I will still hop a flight to come beat you up.

Also. Fuck Celeste. Rude piece of crap ruining her life and trying to drag down my whole beloved cast with her. She needs to die in a fire. If this winds up causing trouble for Lucky I'm going to write myself into the story to strangle that bitch. Totally serious too. But Lucky's mannerisms are hilarious, as per his punching Darwin, getting that five and then walking away like he was the shit. I applaud you for being able to stay in the high school mindset enough each month to be able to get stuff like that down. However, I didn't like Celeste's intrusion. That's the most I can find that irks me with this chapter. Oh well.

Overall, nice job on this one. :]

Nice long chapter! Wow, Celeste has awful timing! D: And poor Cricket! She sounded really bummed about the grades thing. Have I mentioned I love Lucky? His way of thinking is so blunt! I love it. He's such a guy, lol. I hope Lucky and Cricket don't have too many problems coming up. Simon doesn't strike me as a problem because he's seems like a poser who no one really likes... Or maybe that's just me... Neways, loved the chapter

so tomo and lucky arent getting together? damn.

i know! u should mess with our expectations of lucky and cricket getting together and hook tomo and lucky up instead!

ROFLMAO

Lucky's awesome. [You're awesomer for coming up with this plot though.]

Went and read the part where Lucky goes and infiltrates the girls' school and it was awesome as always. So cute seeing "F*ck it all" Lucky so head over heels with a girl while being a girl himself. Hahhaha

-RSR

Hello, there. This is Juliet from A Drop of Romeo, and this story was suggested for the Humor portion of the site. Congrats and all that. :D Here's your raving review:

Lucky's personality is like a breath of fresh air; the author's portrayal of the main character is just wow. This story is ridiculously hilarious-if you want to laugh loads and loads, do read this. The chapter titles are also amusing. The story centers around the kid we never cared for, who is ironically named Lucky, and he's thrown into drama.

XOXO,

Juliet

Funnily enough we don't have a school nurse. We can just say "Hey i feel sick. Can i call home?" and go. Although if noodys at home we can't and if nobody can pick us up we can't. So...

Oh im re-reading your story and i just noticed this story's been going on for five years. Wow

My expectation for the Tomo Lucky thing was actually that they would go to the party and completely fuck it up, like be their usualy crazy selves, which shocks everyone. I guess it kinda did happen just not in the way I was expecting. I love how you just set things up and then they turn in a completely new direction :)

Great chapter!

I... I think I may have skipped a chapter.

Bah, whatever, read it later.

I so thought Lucky was eventually gonna remember having a Totally hot make out session with Darwin... I mean Tomo. _

I liked this chapter, it sat well with me for some reason.

Woah, some pure naked luck right there... did you REALLY have to start it off like that, now I'm scarred for life. These little drunken arcs in this story (thrice in accumulation, and I think another 2 or 3 in the prequels) seem pointless, but oh, are they so witty and hilarious and reflect your drunken habits so much- did I give too much away? Ah, fuck it. You know, I wish Lucky's philosophies would work out in real life for me, because he seems like the perfect person I can try to be right now (and given that you don't know the conditions I'm under, that's flattering).