Thanks for another fantastic update! Your use of irony never ceases to amaze me. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Dude, you blew mind! Seriously, your writing freaking rocks! It even managed to get me in trouble because my mom was geting with my annoyin giggles. I hope you end up writing more, but the thing says '09...so did you stop or at you just really slow at updating? Anyway, I hope you really do finish because this ending really didn't do it.

one cohesive thought, not of regret, not of fear, not of the crunching pain that were my bones, but that sweet, sweet feeling that I was all too familiar with: ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?

totally my reaction too..i guess u had a life n needed to get back to it..awesome story and consistently random.

Not sure if I'm the first to do it, but MAN! I totally challenge you to make this story fit into every category on FP. Please! It would absolutely make my life. Because I would love Lucky to get a crew of undead insta-friends and ... idk... haunt Rika or something. Please say you'll do it! If not for me, then... do it for Lucky! He deserves his revenge! :)

(And I love the story!)

Ahahahaha, sorry I haven't been reviewing much recently, but this chapter was really great, so was the previous one! And the one before that.

I'm really enjoying how this story is going. I don't really have much constructive criticism to say... Hopefully when you finish it I'll be able to say something a bit more helpful...

Keep going! I love reading it.

HAHA. I am now all caught up and I understand why your reviews were all like "WTF" last time I checked. you ARE such a troll.

I loved it, of course.

and I loved being late to the party because I know that he didn't really die.

I think this story could only get more epic if it suddenly became about undead lucky though. I mean, neverending saga then, seriously.

i kind of feel like lucky is part of my life, btw.

anyhoo... CRICKET, WHAT? NO.

hold up, so this is like the end of the story? or is there more? please tel me there's more. or a sequel. because seriously, IT WOULD SERIOUSLY BE A SERIOUS CRIME TO CUT THE STORY OF HERE. SERIOUSLY.

Is Tiff the short version of Tiffany? Because I thought it was for the longest time, but then I realized that it could mean other things as well, especially when y ou said that She was asian... so yeah, is it Tiffany?

Ops... remember I asked you to read over my story after I complmented it... that was before I read that author comment a few chapters ago... the one that said that you didn't like it when people did that. I only asked because I am totally in love with your story, and since you are such a good writer, I thought that maybe you could give me some tips to make my story better. Anyways, my sincere apologies.

LOL, you had me with that stunt of yours. I'm so glad that I read it now instead of when you posted it because then I wouldn't have been able to read the continuation and then I probalbly would have been one of those WTFs.

hm intresting. that other chapter really fooled me. but it seems to me like u cant end this story. That maybe it'll just go on forever! (i really fucking hope so).

im sorry i had 2 comment on this chapter! when i read that u dot hit by a car i laughed so i hard i pissed my pants! seriously!

OMG, so good. I also totally hate streyotypes... they're so... ugh. You know what I mean.

Since you seem to be a very god writer, and having been one for a long time, do you think that maybe you could check out my story. It's called Macey's Journey... my first story on here... so I'm kiknda just typing and hoping it all makes sense.

Dude, that was evil. Evil I say!

Glad you didn't leave it till April Fools' Day.

Poor Lucky.

Seriously, he needs his big break.

Awaiting the next chapter!

-RSR

Alright, so I just finished re-reading/catching up with this. Jeez, I'm so glad I did after you posted this chapter. I'm seriously liking Lucky and his train(wreck) of thoughts.

As for my speculations. The hotel Lucky's working at is holding a rich end party and Rika is going, and by association Cricket's taken along. Cue teenage soap opera drama there. Haha, however it turns out, I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.