I just about died along with Lucky in Chapter 45. I'm so glad that he did not succumb to that particular fate! Still faithfully reading :)

- Jada

... Ain't so sad no more. Yo, that was mean though. I did wonder why the status wasn't COMPLETED. Darn you...

No, this is the reason why YOU had PMS and decided that you were off by a mile and wanted to post some filler crap just to satisfy us/yourself. Although I think it's more likely for yourself. Funny thing is, I wasn't expecting her to say yes or no, kinda dribble around the answer in the first place. Of course, I implied that triple-boobed octopus was in there so, obviously, his handwriting should be pretty poor. And you did say you were going to finish this if it took 60 or 70 or 80 chapters, so I was a little hesitant in calling it the end, anyway. And this all sounds like padding to say that I was not fooled at all, and I wasn't. Honestly. Really. Sure.

As for this chapter, all I can say is:

LA LA LA YOUR MOM.

Lol you evil, evil writer:P Lol. I was sure it was over:P Well anyway i didnt expect cricket to say no:o

I'm kind of ridiculous, but I actually think it would have been really clever if you had finished the story like that. I was fooled, but I certainly wasn't upset about it. It would have been poetic.

dude i was so i angry i couldn't write a review of last chapter lol i was so sad it was over, i was like wtf? but i love this story it can't be over. i'm seriously the happiest girl alive right now lol

:_:

I truly have mixed feelings on this chapter.

1. Lucky is not dead - cause for frickin celebration. (That was mean by the way. I honestly shed tears)

2. Cricket said no - how dare she! Previous plans or no - if Lucky asks you out you drop EVERYTHING. With the exception on surgery, childbirth, car accidents, deaths and contagious sicknesses.

SHE BETTER BE DYING!

And thanks so much for not being able to inflict torture any longer. You're pseudo-awesome.

Huh. Okay, I'll pay that one.

._.

I am going to assume you meant the end of the chapter cuz the story isn't under 'complete' yet.

But if you didn't:

OMFGLUCKYNO

Don't be dead!

Ignoring the fact that he might be dead and it might be over that was so Lucky. Only he could finally get the girl and then get hit by a car. Didn't anyone ever teach him not to run into the middle of the street? Ever?

I'm gonna go cry in agony trying to figure out if its really over.

WHAT THE FUCK! LMFAO. I burst out laughing, but seriously... wow. Part of me is going to pretend that you confused April Fools with Christmas and the other part of me is going to reread this later.

wait...'s he dead?

HOLY AWESOMENESS! LOVED THE END. seriously. I really didn't see it coming, but now that it's passed... it makes perfect sense with the title and all, haha. Poor Lucky! he just gets the girl, and smack-bang. Madness. I love it. Fantastic story! I dearly hope that you'll continue your other story Bowlan Street, or churn out another because you are one fantastic and hilarious writer. SUPERB STORY.

Okay, so I'm going to be optimistic and say that's NOT the ending of your story and just another cliffhanger because you SAID Tomo would be appearing soon in your last chapter's author's note, so YEAH. :D

And now I'm anonymously hating you.

I logged out because apparently there's only one review allowed per chapter, so I am unofficially hating you.