Reviews for So I was Hit by a Car the Other Day |
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![]() ![]() Okay here's the deal... I spent the past few weeks of my life reading this, then waiting for what- a month- for a update and then Lucky DIES! What... the... FUCK? I loved the story, (Hate the ending... so very much...) it was very well writen and it had great characters... BUT THE DAMN ENDING. ugh. You better be kidding... he's gotta wake up out of a coma with cricket at his side; he HAS to! ~ Emma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you fucking kidding me? It was a fitting ending I must say though. Thank you for all the entertainment and memories for the past four years. Methinks a re-read is in order. Is a new story planned? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Worst. Ending. Ever. Cliche and implies that Lucky is dead. Which is a huge disappointment. I could baw on all day about how you ended this and how this took a month to write, but I won't, and will compliment you on the whole story's plotline and entertainment value and will be rereading the whole thing again to see what might have caused what happened at what point which I don't know. 1) I know you are 24 years old. Muahaha. 2)I'm going to need to see what I did in order to know... let me see here... 3) What next? Is this going to beome a... tetralogy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate you. |
![]() ![]() Is that it? Did he just die? What... that's sad. Who would have thought lucky would get hit by an SUV and DIE? And he had potential... Anywho, I loved this story it was freaking hilariously awesome and psycho but awesome nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() Holy Fuck, is that really the end? |
![]() ![]() IT CAN'T BE OVER LIKE THAT! Tell me you're just kidding D: He'll wake up in hospital with lotsa IV's sticking out his arms and Cricket asleep on the chair next to him after a mini coma of 3 days or something, right? OK, I'm calm now. Hahaha, talk about irony! Poor unlucky Lucky. Nahh at the social life, my friends and family know me well enough to not be bothered by my anti-social bouts :P No prob for not stealing, haha. Happy holidays :) -RSR |
![]() ![]() WTF? I mean, this ending makes sense Lucky being Lucky and all, but thats so frustrating! He gets the girl then splat. Also, I'm sad that the story's over. Thanks for the entertainment while it lasted though. xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw its over:( Its a fitting ending but it was kinda out of the blue. Lol. |
![]() ![]() you have GOT to be KIDDING ME? No way can you end this story in this way! D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucky no! That's crazy. I'm speechless and sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT! I'm not sure whether to flame you or applaud you. Way to completely buzzkill. What happened? You got sick of writing this? Bloody hell. Talk about a twist ending. But now I'm sad. I liked Lucky. Also way to completely traumatize Cricket. From a writer's point of view, yeah, I dig it. It's a "clean" ending at least, and it's black comedy in its circularity. From a reader's, I hate it. I was completely into the character, and then you killed him off like an after thought. Damn it. Erisah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great, great, great story. Please update it soon. I've been entertaining the thought of Tomo Darwin. For some reason, I think they would make a super cute couple. What do you think? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing this all the way through, but I literally, as a form of insane procrastination just spent all of yesterday and today reading this without a break. It's awesome. I hope you continue, and thanks for making my exam time more bearable. :] |
![]() ![]() Hi! I'm a random silent reader who normally doesn't bother with reviews cause I'm just lazy like that. But SIWHBaCTOD (wow what a long abbrieviation) totally deserves as many reviews as it gets, cause it's so ROFL awesome! Seriously. I've spent the past 3 days locked in my room being completely antisocial cause I was busy reading this. This... is just amazing. If I wasn't so against plagiarism I would so steal it. But I am so I won't. Just know that if I had access to an account I would Favorite and Track this story! I want a Lucky lol. I can't believe how little reviews you're getting for such a socks-rocking story. Really you should be getting thousands. Don't really know what tips for improvement I can add here. I like the lists :) And I like pretty much everything else as well. Sigh. Can't wait for the next update! I'll drop another review then :) -RSR |