Reviews for So I was Hit by a Car the Other Day
Hell's first Icicle chapter 4 . 8/24/2005
ack. i feel like a bitch wen i dun review, and this story's relli gud, so here's ur review. ta-da! hey, this 'hot' girl he rescues, do they meet lata?
WeirdoFromAnotherPlanet chapter 4 . 8/24/2005
I don't care much about replies, i just like reviewing! Lol, anyway, I like this chapter best at the beginning, when you had his whole reaction to the getting-hit-by-a-car thing. Is the mysterious blonde girl going to be in the next chapter? I hope so! This chapter was good, and the bit with Linx talking to the car was hilarious! Am I your only reviewer? I sincerely hope not! PEOPLE, READ THIS STORY NOW!
WeirdoFromAnotherPlanet chapter 3 . 8/18/2005
Yeah! You updated! This chapter was cool, not, as you said, really funny, but I loved it all the same. PLEASE update the next chapter soon, I have to see what happened to Lucky! Oh, and by the way, Lucky disguised himself as a girl to pretect Rika? Ouch. Well anyways, as I said before, excellent cahpter, and please update soon!
mousedahouse chapter 2 . 8/16/2005
Yet another great chapter. It always brightens my day when I read your wonderfully written story as I laugh with each paragraph.

I honestly don't know what may happen. I suspect that some old love of Lucky's will make an appearance in the next few chapters (as I read the summary). Since this story is listed under romance, at least one of the following has to happen: a. he gets the girl he loved before. b. a new girl comes to town. c. he almost gets the girl, but doesnt, ending in tradegy. lol, last one is a little dramatic, so I'm going with a or b. _ heehee, I tried.
WeirdoFromAnotherPlanet chapter 2 . 8/15/2005
This story is excellent! It's so funny, and written really well! One thing boys call other boys bitches? Just wondering...Anyway, i hope you update soon, and I don't relly care about the romance so much, because you're actually writing long chapters! It's amazing. Anyway, update soon!
chainedreamer chapter 2 . 8/12/2005

thank you soo much.. its been ages since an FP story made me laugh so hard.. my housemates are probabily worried now cuz of the loud weird noises at 1:20am.. but thats all right.. and i dont mind the absence of romance.. yet. the other parts are soo much fun to read.. and Lucky is just soo lovable.. i love the randomness of his thoughts.. it gets me off on a tangent too.. and the way he always makes these tiny lists and Darwin is a really good frd..

u so hafta update soon.. oh and one more thing.. the girl u mention in the summary.. shes already in the pic right.. so teh new one would be 'The One'?

umm random thought that.. dont need to answer if u dont want to give away teh story!

keep it up and i want more.. ASAP!
fantasyEsalno chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
Damn hilarious... I was laughing at just about every paragraph. Great story!
Dolenrothiel chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
cool...write more
chainedreamer chapter 1 . 8/8/2005

I have not read any of your previous stuff but this one has a hilarious beginning.. I really enjoyed it and i hope u update soon.. and oh do i need to read the other two to get this one or is it a on its own thingy?

Update ASAP it was amazing!
mousedahouse chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Absolutely hillarious! I NEVER laugh out loud when reading a story, and while reading this one, I had to cover my mouth as to not make a scene.

Not only is this hillarious, but very well written. I liked all the commentary from Lucky as well as the list- a "refreshing taste", as those poetic pansies say.

I liked what you said about character development. Before anything majorly "hanky panky" should happen, the characters have to have some grounded personalities! Anyway, I respected that author's note.

I can't wait for more installments of this story!
MasqueradingLifeAway chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
- I think this story is great.. I think I actually laughed out loud at least four times.. which is not common. Anyways, well, yeah, I liked it a lot, but I've already said that, so yeah, I'm gonna stop this here so I don't further me sounding like more of an idiot than I am.
aestuum chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Oh, awsome story _ I love it so far, you have intresting characters and really cool ideas, I cant wait to see the rest of the plot
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