ack. i feel like a bitch wen i dun review, and this story's relli gud, so here's ur review. ta-da! hey, this 'hot' girl he rescues, do they meet lata?

I don't care much about replies, i just like reviewing! Lol, anyway, I like this chapter best at the beginning, when you had his whole reaction to the getting-hit-by-a-car thing. Is the mysterious blonde girl going to be in the next chapter? I hope so! This chapter was good, and the bit with Linx talking to the car was hilarious! Am I your only reviewer? I sincerely hope not! PEOPLE, READ THIS STORY NOW!

Yeah! You updated! This chapter was cool, not, as you said, really funny, but I loved it all the same. PLEASE update the next chapter soon, I have to see what happened to Lucky! Oh, and by the way, Lucky disguised himself as a girl to pretect Rika? Ouch. Well anyways, as I said before, excellent cahpter, and please update soon!

Yet another great chapter. It always brightens my day when I read your wonderfully written story as I laugh with each paragraph.

I honestly don't know what may happen. I suspect that some old love of Lucky's will make an appearance in the next few chapters (as I read the summary). Since this story is listed under romance, at least one of the following has to happen: a. he gets the girl he loved before. b. a new girl comes to town. c. he almost gets the girl, but doesnt, ending in tradegy. lol, last one is a little dramatic, so I'm going with a or b. _ heehee, I tried.

This story is excellent! It's so funny, and written really well! One thing though...do boys call other boys bitches? Just wondering...Anyway, i hope you update soon, and I don't relly care about the romance so much, because you're actually writing long chapters! It's amazing. Anyway, update soon!

hey..

thank you soo much.. its been ages since an FP story made me laugh so hard.. my housemates are probabily worried now cuz of the loud weird noises at 1:20am.. but thats all right.. and i dont mind the absence of romance.. yet. the other parts are soo much fun to read.. and Lucky is just soo lovable.. i love the randomness of his thoughts.. it gets me off on a tangent too.. and the way he always makes these tiny lists and Darwin is a really good frd..

u so hafta update soon.. oh and one more thing.. the girl u mention in the summary.. shes already in the pic right.. so teh new one would be 'The One'?

umm random thought that.. dont need to answer if u dont want to give away teh story!

keep it up and i want more.. ASAP!

Damn hilarious... I was laughing at just about every paragraph. Great story!

cool...write more

Hey..

I have not read any of your previous stuff but this one has a hilarious beginning.. I really enjoyed it and i hope u update soon.. and oh do i need to read the other two to get this one or is it a on its own thingy?

Update ASAP it was amazing!

Absolutely hillarious! I NEVER laugh out loud when reading a story, and while reading this one, I had to cover my mouth as to not make a scene.

Not only is this hillarious, but very well written. I liked all the commentary from Lucky as well as the list- a "refreshing taste", as those poetic pansies say.

I liked what you said about character development. Before anything majorly "hanky panky" should happen, the characters have to have some grounded personalities! Anyway, I respected that author's note.

I can't wait for more installments of this story!

- I think this story is great.. I think I actually laughed out loud at least four times.. which is not common. Anyways, well, yeah, I liked it a lot, but I've already said that, so yeah, I'm gonna stop this here so I don't further me sounding like more of an idiot than I am.

Oh, awsome story _ I love it so far, you have intresting characters and really cool ideas, I cant wait to see the rest of the plot