Reviews for So I was Hit by a Car the Other Day |
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![]() ![]() Wow..I've been reading this story silently ever since I discovered fictionpress and thought up a bajillion scenarios where Tomo coulve helped Lucky out. Is this the first time you've considered this? Update soon! Can't wait! |
![]() ![]() Dear Lainiee, Your story, 'So I was Hit by a Car the Other Day', has been nominated for Best Non-Romance at the Some Kind of Wonderful Romance Awards. Congratulations! You can view your nomination at Keep up your fantastic work! Sincerely, Lou SKoW Judge CS Category: Best Non-Romance |
![]() ![]() Wow. Talk about confused Cricket. Pretty fun how you get to throw details in and make it all work. As always, looking forward to the next chapter ] here's to hoping it won't be as hard to write! -RSR |
![]() ![]() ![]() I... I-. Y-you- TOMO'D! *leaves* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for making me laugh out loud (as always). So, I was thinking... Lucky Cricket Licket. What do you think? Sounds an awful lot like "Lick it." :D Looking forward to the next chapter! - J |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see that FakFiction making a contribution. Just to be incessantly prodding, I would've liked to see the 2nd version around. Why? Do I need a reason? Nah. If there was more blood and more Linx in this place all for it. You made the kiss scene here quite awkwardly paced, which is a little unexpected of you. It never occurred to me that awkward emotions wouldn't be the only thing going for these two. My, my, what is confused Lucky going to do. Btw, totally true with the crazy and sex. And by the looks of it, Tomo! (ambiguity) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story freaking cracks me up. Just sayin. LOVE IT. |
![]() ![]() Wow. This story was epic. Read it all in one sitting, and while drinking. I now have a new fav saying. "the crazy is strong with this one" |
![]() ![]() ROFLMAO. Cricket's older brother is Cole? Dude how do you get all these relationships and relations straight? Like do you have them all figured out when you start a plot or just add as you go along? |
![]() ![]() What Jin got with Celeste? Can't wait to see how the rest of the day goes. And honestly I really did not get Linx's tiny shorts. What's that got to do with the walk of shame? -RSR |
![]() ![]() Oh man! Just skimmed the next two chapters and it's al so angsty. Incredible how you can still make it hilarious. The psycho-analysis with Cricket was pretty interesting. Kay, off to the next chapter... right now I'm betting Lucky wins this fight though ] -RSR |
![]() ![]() Bahahaha! That was the best ending ever! You successfully managed to turn a comfortable tender atmosphere into complete chaos. Poor Lucky, I love that you keep bringing old characters back to mess his life up further. I also love the rapid updating :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, things just never get old with Lucky! His crush is related to the guy that wants him dead. Epic! I'm very much so looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness. The end of that chapter was just awesome. Cole is really her brother? Serious? That was just outrageously unexpected. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 1. Dammit! I couldn't review the last chapter because I was in class. 2. Yay! Another update in such a short amount of time. 3. Who's Cole? I can't remember if he's the one who gave Lucky a black eye or if he's Celeste's ex that caught them when she was about to give him head...I iz confused. Anyway, awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one. |