Reviews for Cherry Rose Ash
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
This tells a tragic tale of an early experience that without doubt leaves scars. All early experiences do, good or bad as they shape our responses and outlook for future relationships.

This is powerful work and describes very crisply, the impact of this experience. Indeed to a point where I can visualise the scene and its tragedy and almost feel the emotion with you.

Expertly done


philoslove chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
Strong symbolism here. How e'er fleeting is such that may be considered love, or perhaps a brief fling on the satin sheets? relative. I feel the crumbling strength (or so I see) of the persona throughout the poem. Impactful. A cruelly beautiful poem.

skin, smoke, sordid sexashes flicked onto fair skinI brand you, my luv
Different Definitions Of Storm chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
Wow...! Very nice. I like the metaphors spaced throughout the poem, and the images you've envoked. Great poem. )
Tikklz chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Very nice. I felt like I could almost hear you reading me this, your voice and heart where so into it.
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
Absolutely know, i'm just gonna stop reviewing your stuff.
Darcia Plushie chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
0.0i lvoe you. you're awesome!
destroyed perfection chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
Very deep. It relays your emotions. I liked how you consistently used ashes and cigarettes. I'm truly honored to have you as one of my reviewers.
the big sleep chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
Holy shit. This is fantastic! The whole thing gave me the image of this James Dean character, and, well, it was just fucking great. Awesome title, too.

- guybrush
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
oh my god, AMAZING imagery. he used my palm as an ashtray - he was unlocked doors, blood rushing. ON MY FAVOURITES LIST YOU GO :P
azncookie33 chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
i'm just mezmorized by the way you write your poems and your feelings in them.
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
I really liked the imagery that sprung to mind while i read this... gorgeous work.
Unready chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
wow. stunning, yet beautiful.
Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
This is so dark and beautiful. It made me think of the sun boiling. Really wonderful.
lobsteremily chapter 1 . 8/24/2005
Loved the comparisons, use of colors and symbols!
asyousaid chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
I like this a lot. "He was my surrender" is the kind of brilliant line that you manage to use casually, and yet really effectively.
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