Reviews for Cherry Rose Ash
seasick chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
uhh... the review i wrote in "He walks the halls of this mansion" was meant for this one. the mansion poem had a charactor that everyone falls in love with in the first few lines.
boba-fetish chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
That was tragic and wonderful at the same time. It makes your heart Job!

P.S. Thanks for your review.
kit feral chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
"He used my palm as an ashtray" was the line that really stood out to me. Overall, I loved this- especially the title. The whole cigarette metaphor was excellent and the emotions were very strong. I adore your writing style. Great work, keep it up! .
Abby Sequioa chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
this is brillilently written I love the imagery and well the poem! *clap clap clap*
thebigbadwolf chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Dystorque chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
I love this poem from title to tip! Though not all your language is fancy, you evoke a very deep and human emotion with it. All the cigarette metaphors hold this work together in a neat way. All in all, great work!
liz anya chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Amazing. Heartbreaking. Beautiful.
DiffusedBlues chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
We're typical...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
i liek this a lot.. its so powerful and beautiful.. awesome job
Senshi's Tenshi chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
WOW! _ ! That's so intense! I could picture it and feel it..well, not exactly feel it but what your words gave a tone to. I am curious on how you wrote this out. I want to know if this is what happened, but I don't want to pry. It's marvelous writing. It reminds me of something sad.

You wrote this well. I might have to read it again.


I wanted to write you an e-mail, but there was no address.

Thank you very much for your time and kind words! I think I'm mostly glad I'm not writing crap. _

Your bio is small, but you've written a heck of a lot! O_O! I don't think I can go through all of it. I will skim, read and then review what I can/like. - Once again, great authoress of magnitude-writing proportions, thank you for reading my comparatively minute work and then reviewing so generously. It made my day.

MuCh LoVe,~*Senshi's Tenshi*~ -AKA- !~*Shi-chan*~!
a moth in lace chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
WHOA! That was so awesome! The extended metaphor of the cigarette cherry/cigarette butt was very very effective. The ending was superb and it was just so great. But why is it that everything involving cigarette cherries and sex-based love reminds me of Fight Club? Haha, anyway, very good poem. I really liked it a lot. _ Keep writin'.

flaming.footprints chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Wow, heart breaking and beautifully written. Going on favourites. Thanks for your review. : )

InTheColdRain chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Touching. It paints a picture without a lot of description. I love that.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Aw...that is so sad. It has brough me to tears. I love how the emotion is so raw...and the analogy you used at the end. Keep it up!
slumbermydarlin chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
first up, thanks for the reviews you wrote for me and sorry i took so long to hit ya back. i couldn't quite figure how to use this! *stupid me*

love your works! keep writin! )
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