uhh... the review i wrote in "He walks the halls of this mansion" was meant for this one. the mansion poem had a charactor that everyone falls in love with in the first few lines.

That was tragic and wonderful at the same time. It makes your heart Job!

P.S. Thanks for your review.

"He used my palm as an ashtray" was the line that really stood out to me. Overall, I loved this- especially the title. The whole cigarette metaphor was excellent and the emotions were very strong. I adore your writing style. Great work, keep it up! .

this is brillilently written I love the imagery and well the poem! *clap clap clap*

incredible...

I love this poem from title to tip! Though not all your language is fancy, you evoke a very deep and human emotion with it. All the cigarette metaphors hold this work together in a neat way. All in all, great work!

Amazing. Heartbreaking. Beautiful.

We're typical...

i liek this a lot.. its so powerful and beautiful.. awesome job

WOW! _ ! That's so intense! I could picture it and feel it..well, not exactly feel it but what your words gave a tone to. I am curious on how you wrote this out. I want to know if this is what happened, but I don't want to pry. It's marvelous writing. It reminds me of something sad.

You wrote this well. I might have to read it again.

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I wanted to write you an e-mail, but there was no address.

Thank you very much for your time and kind words! I think I'm mostly glad I'm not writing crap. _

Your bio is small, but you've written a heck of a lot! O_O! I don't think I can go through all of it. I will skim, read and then review what I can/like. - Once again, great authoress of magnitude-writing proportions, thank you for reading my comparatively minute work and then reviewing so generously. It made my day.

MuCh LoVe,~*Senshi's Tenshi*~ -AKA- !~*Shi-chan*~!

WHOA! That was so awesome! The extended metaphor of the cigarette cherry/cigarette butt was very very effective. The ending was superb and it was just so great. But why is it that everything involving cigarette cherries and sex-based love reminds me of Fight Club? Haha, anyway, very good poem. I really liked it a lot. _ Keep writin'.

-marie

Wow, heart breaking and beautifully written. Going on favourites. Thanks for your review. : )

~Shavo

Touching. It paints a picture without a lot of description. I love that.

Aw...that is so sad. It has brough me to tears. I love how the emotion is so raw...and the analogy you used at the end. Keep it up!

first up, thanks for the reviews you wrote for me and sorry i took so long to hit ya back. i couldn't quite figure how to use this! *stupid me*

love your works! keep writin! )