|Reviews for Cherry Rose Ash|
| naughtgreen chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I hate young love.
But your symbolism I can deal with.
| NightSprite chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
eerie imagery; powerful. then again, everything you write is.
| Sunami Silverblade chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Ah, a love like sand through an hourglass... so short yet burning bright while it lasted...
Such a lovely, sad poem. And a wonderful title-I love the ideas behind it all. Just amazing.
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
Wow, it was very descriptive to say the least.
| Lakoria chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
I liked it. At frist I I didn't get it, but then it became clear. Good job!
God bless, Lakoria
| v3point7 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
the ending was so heartwrenching- i love it.
| Elizabeth Ebony chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
powerful,beautiful and very vivid.
| Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
wow...that was powerful. the messages you protrsyed were very real, that i know some could relate too.
| Hindsight chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
This is a great straightforward poem-I think the cigarette metaphor was just about perfect.
One of my favorite things about this poem is the fact that it actually has dynamic action to it-it feels like it's moving and changing, just like the love it describes. Awesome.
Btw, thank you for the review, it was much appreciated. :)
| myheartiswaypastbeating chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
So amazingly written, really great. caliorbust