Ah...young love.

I hate young love.

But your symbolism I can deal with.

eerie imagery; powerful. then again, everything you write is.

Ah, a love like sand through an hourglass... so short yet burning bright while it lasted...

Such a lovely, sad poem. And a wonderful title-I love the ideas behind it all. Just amazing.

-Sunami Silverblade

Wow, it was very descriptive to say the least.

I liked it. At frist I I didn't get it, but then it became clear. Good job!

God bless, Lakoria

the ending was so heartwrenching- i love it.

powerful,beautiful and very vivid.

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wow...that was powerful. the messages you protrsyed were very real, that i know some could relate too.

EB

This is a great straightforward poem-I think the cigarette metaphor was just about perfect.

One of my favorite things about this poem is the fact that it actually has dynamic action to it-it feels like it's moving and changing, just like the love it describes. Awesome.

Btw, thank you for the review, it was much appreciated. :)

So amazingly written, really great. caliorbust