I'm a little sad we didn't get Lee's side of the controlling bitch-girl who ruined him story. Lee and Reggie's responses towards each other are amazing and very cute. I wish we would have had a Lee POV to see him describe Reggie and them together. I feel like this story was just the shell, and could have expanded a lot more.
I like that you used characters not commonly found among the fictionpress crew, aka black guy and a chunky guy. It's typically skinny white guys.
~ibbits

Nice story!

Awesome story! Are you completely rewriting this one, or are you going to just upload whenever you have time? I really really hope you haven't given up on it. I feel like there's still a lot to find out about the characters, plus I just really enjoy these characters and their storyline so I hope there is more :) I'll be patient though.

loved this story .i hope you have not forgotten about it .

I know it's been two years since you've updated this story, but I've gotta say- they're adorable. I really enjoyed all 23 chapters, and was disappointed when I realized it wasn't finished. I know it might now mean anything, but please, please, please consider continuing this story. I cannot express how much I love it and how excited I would be if you did. I'm gonna put it on alert just in case you do.

Just read the whole story. I know it's been a while, a year, in fact, but I hope you keep writing this. Good job. I really like the character development.

a little bit rushed, but whatever.

:]]

Since it was mentioned in earlier chapters, I actually have no problem with your quick 'pace' - prefer it, in fact. :3 It's refreshing to see a fairly quick-paced story as in opposed to nearly every other slash fic out there, in which you have to drudge through 14-2o chapters before they even acknowledge the fact that they like each other (and then another couple of chapters where they do nothing about it and obsess over the fact that they're, yes, gay!).

That sounded rant-ish, didn't it? -Grin-

I also like the fact that your characters already know they're gay, and that one of the main characters (Lee) are a bit on the chunky side; not to mention that this is the first slash fic I've seen that has inter-racial relationships.

The only thing I find odd is Xander and Shen - the fact that two out of three Asian characters in the whole story are gay, and slightly too much of a coincidence they both end up together. Might be just me, but I can't find it too realistic.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to next chapters (if there are anymore - I'm a bit confused by your ending notes).

The infamous Rasta story! I will certainly have to keep up with this one, for all the raves I've heard about it. :D

Either of the Bronte sisters? There are three. Also, I wanna see a FOBBII Asian in this story [ Although it'd be weird for you to introduce a new character into a completed story upon my whim, huh. Nvm that then, but if you do actually read 19th century literature, get your hands on Anne Bronte's The Tenant of Wildfeld Hall, its better than Charlotte's horribly mundane Jane Eyre. (I dunno, I figured you forgot Anne because she's generally... the more easily forgotten sister out of the three. But hey, if you forgot Charlotte, don't bother, she sucks, and if you forgot Emily, well she's awesome, so. acknowledge her existence, plox).

Oh my god. How I love these two! :D

Too much cute... Not that I don't like it, but I can't help something awful will happen because I'm just that pessimistic! *sobs*

LOL. Christ! Reggie is too cute... I hope it works out for them ;D

Seeing as I'm new to fp, I couldn't review earlier, but Gosh! this story is The Bomb!

Keep it up!

Heyla! I have to say that I don't review often,as in,well I never I just wanted to say that I think that this story is pretty awesome and damn funny at points,I read all 23 posted chapters in one day that's how awesome it up the good work.