Reviews for threadbare
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
What can I say?

You're a literary genius!
super happy nuclear girl chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
what can i say that others already have not?

i think little spiders are sweet, but not in this poem. i still loved it though, loved it a lot.

poor butterfly.
For Absent Friends chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
I love the imagery and the feeling of politely killing that this poem evokes. This is a beautiful piece.
lookingwest chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
an interesting way of writing this out, painfully real...good job!
les petits bateaux chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
Vivid and colourful imagery here. Your descriptions are truly spectacular. Somehow, the butterfly and the spider reminds me something of humans. Human qualities. I love the ending.

Trinity
notACTUALLYwriting chapter 1 . 11/16/2005
weird and artfully written. I like it.
XxVendettxX chapter 1 . 11/9/2005
Something (everything?) about this was abstract, something ive found ina lot of your work that i enjoy. I really dont need to comment on how talented you are, as so many people have done so before me. In any case i will say this, you're work is an inspiration.
pornographic priestess chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
delicious. the imagery is just golden. i repeat: delicious.
hey maria chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
"she moans to the loss of (carnation) wings" Very very beautiful. And the last "tata, darling" is just the perfect ending to such a wonderful poem. Love the images this sparks...and I love spiders.
not sure yet chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
very interesting, i like your style though, and the random speaking in here really did it for me, nicely done
evm chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
i love the fact that this is so many stories all going on at once in a poem/association play. brilliant.
BangBangYourDead chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
wow this was very good. You can see the picture in your head.
Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
1) I love you too!2) This is brilliant. What a different view of spiders and their catches. Superbly done.3) I superbly a word?
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
that was alright. i liked. an ominous atmosphere, nectareous and disturbing. good job
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 9/7/2005
Omg omg...I'm such a bitch...I never review you or bothered to read your work and you're this amazing! This is brilliant...wow...such a powerful effect, I adore it! Really macabre! Love, Mia
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