Nice rhyme sceme!

I like!

This is beautifully written, you have such great imagery, I'm jealous! Artemis is my absolute favorite goddess! Thanks for reviewing the 'Wise One'!BLessed Be!

Wonderful poem, with some well-written lines. I love it.

i like it. its mystical and has a sort of magic about it at the same time. good job and keep it up!

~davida

Very nice. Unlike a lot of poetry I've seen about goddesses and mythological creatures, you've kept the original culture's image of her quite well. The last line is so much like a prayer, with just a touch of desperation. Perfect way to end.

Interesting, I like it. Great descriptions. "Keep a fallen star lit for me" is a beautiful line.

An uplifting prayer to a goddess long forgotten. Simply beautiful and calm. It's peaceful in rythem and lets one sit and think after a rough day. Nice Job,

-The Depths of Blue

Beautiful...simply beautiful

Kel-chan

i like how your poems are so differnt than the norm thats seen like love/angst (aka me) and all. very fun and makes it worth reading unlike commerical crap thats out there these days

Very enchanting-well done! And thanks for the review!

i love it...so much passion in ur words...this is a beautiful piece...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

very well written. love the beginning and the ending. sounds like a prayer in a way.

~Sorrow~

Beautiful. It's so simple to me, and yet as all your peices are...still beautiful.

beautiful. "Keep a fallen star lit for me."- I love that line. keep it up.

wow...really good...i like it

thanks for the reviews )