aw:)so swett of him :D cooking dinner, visiting her.. hehe if it was me, i would be seriously thinking that he likes me. hello? she so doesnt see it? its SOO obvious.

ahhaa. this is another fun fun fun chapter. i really like them now because they are arguing in such a different erm.. different... tone? manner? i dunno. its just different. a good sorta different. its not like they hate each other (which was previously the case) .. now they just.. i dunno. its like their unique way of flirting. :D haha.

o, the way they are progressing is Oh-So-Sweet. but i cant wait to learn more about scott and madison and Ian too.. u sound like u have this crazy explosive plot under the wraps (which i'm sure u hav) :)

keep writing and i'll keep reading! :D take care gurl. all the best!

This is really funny! Keep the chapters coming!

Wehey! I'm hyper and happy and technically should be in lessons...eh! I haven't got anything to do anyway!

Nice update! Viruses suck! Can't wait for the next chapter:)

Nice chapter. Update soon. Oh, and also...in a pool? LoL. Cheers,

storywritergirl xoxo

LMAO this chap was hella funny and i just love reading this story it alwayz cracks me up n i realy enjoy reading it.i hope you update soon wid the amusement and more hints about david's feelings for her .~ lol

I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the great work! It's so good and I'm getting really into it.

"It's the three of us against him, your brothers, and Ian." Three of who? I got kinda confused...I get Madison and Sam, but who's the third person? Leah? Otherwise, nice funny chapter. Obviously I'm rereading, but I can't help it...it's addictive! ;P

Nice update, do it again soon or else!

lol...I think my favorite lines in this were "Oh, God help your sinful little soul" and "…Straight to hell with you. You’re going straight to hell." There's just something entertaining about the word "sinful", isn't there? It's like joking around with your best friends about becoming a groupie. This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far.

I like Dr. Harris; she seems like a really cool adult. I really love your characterization; have I mentioned that yet? Especially in this chapter; I don't know, it just feels like I got to know Leah a lot better, and even Sam and David a little bit. It's nice.

Update soon, soon, soon!

I don't know why I typed that three times, so don't even ask, and it doesn't look right to delete it, so there it is. Consider it added incentive.

Write On, The Guru

And the sexual tension continues... lol This chapter amused me intensely. I loved the encounter between Ian and Sam in the beginning, he's such a sweetie. Sometimes I wish he did have feelings for Sam, because that make it oh so much more angsty. Plus, you know how much I love the whole best friends becoming more plot line. Anyhoo, what else did I like... Of course the interaction between Sam and David was enjoyable. It's so obvious that they want to jump each other's bones... The whole him hovering over her on the bed was... hot. Whoo. That boy IS bad. Oh, and thumb wars? Come on... He just wanted an excuse to touch her. Guys can be so transparent...

The whole thing with Madison and Leah was... interesting. I wonder why neither of them mentioned that they had been keeping in touch. Am I just overanalyzing again, or is that odd...? Anyway, time for one of the lines that made me giggle like a school girl "Oh, God help your sinful little soul." LOL The inner monolouge in this story cracks me up. 'Gotta love witty, sarcastic consciences, eh? ;o)

Alrighty, well, fantastic job as per usual. It's torture waiting to see how long it'll be before those two give in and do the nasty, but I suppose I'll survive. Until then, be careful when you venture outside because I hear moose run rabid around your area... lol Tchao for now, chica!

This story is driving me insane, its so good. Update soon.

*sigh* I'm in love with this story. i don't think there could be a much better one, hope to fead more soon

~Fairy~

Hahahaha! Once again, very entertaining! She almost let it slip that she thinks he's gorgeous, eh? Makes you wonder if it was the bug or her mistake that made her throw up? _-

Heh heh, and David's little eavesdropping was so funny...'cuz now he knows about her 'dreams.' Haha, nice touch with David's last line there, and I also loved how the doctor knew David was hiding, haha. Everyone has to get healthy again so there can be some, ahem, intimacy soon. Maybe you did or didn't plan this, but every chapter Sam seems to allow David to go a little farther in his advances. Which begs the question...just how far is she willing to go? _- Anyway, keep writing!

OKAY! HOW MUCH DID I LOVE THIS CHAPTER? lIKE THIS MUCH! THAT WAS SO CRAZY!

MAN!

WOWMAMA!

I loved the whole thing with the pool and the eavesdropping AND I LOVE How David enters the room; it always makes SAM SO jumpy and you introduce his presence with "his husky voice" I find that so sexy!

That's is -so far-the sexiest chapter. Esp. when he said that Sam is 5 for 6.. AWW! Slowly, he's letting her know! It's ADORABLE!

Oh, and when you have more 'sexy scenes'-like when he rolled on top of her-I would suggest taking Sam's inner comments out-because it distracts the whole ATMOSPHERE of the 'event.' lol.

I LOVE THIS STORY! You rock, my dear.

Imma recommend a story to you -a REAL novel(s) "Sloppy Firsts"And "Second Helpings". You'll see why after you read about the male lead-Marcus Flutie! YOU'll ENJOY IT! It's my fave novels!

OMIGOSH! how can you say angel is the sexiest of the sexiest? obviously it is Spike! hehhehe jk. really good story