I'm loving this. Update really soon

hey

i just wanted to say this story is looking great so far! my fav character so far has got 2 b david...how can you not like the cocky attitude! lol.

i wonder what's going on with Ian as well, i mean it's obvious something's not right and the fact that he's not telling sam is even more worrying.

Anyways good job and please update soon,

::sigh:: :o)I *love* this story! Great chapter!

~Autumn~

Do you know how happy I am when you update? Your new chappies can always make me feel better. Wanna know why? It's cuz ur chappies r so good. They are funny and your characters are believeable? So is Sammy gonna get sick? Whose gonna take care of her? Uh...when is Ms. D gonna make an appearance? Who is my favorite character? Uh...it's a tie between Samantha and David. I think I like Samantha better. I just love her sarcasm. Please update soon.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

The story that I suggested that you read wasn't my story. I just thought that you would enjoy it. Anyway...Great story so far. About the whole "More bitchy" thing, I just like to read Sam and David's arguments. No biggy. Great story. I didn;t know that you updated though. I haven't been online for a while. But I'm glad you did.

Hey sup. Okay usually I'd write a long review, but since I have to go study for SAP, I'll make this short.

Cute chappie as per usual. Love the interaction between Davidi and Sam. And the whole Sam walikng into the tree stint, LMFAO. Reminds me of a certain girl whom I know and love (yes Sabi, I'm pointing and laughing at you :P)

As for fave character...um... wow I guess David cuz he gives of the whole 'charming-bad boy-with-a-big-heart' vibe and supposedly, girls like bad boys. Not me personally but yeah I'll explain my reasoning some other time.

Anyways this review is getting too long and I have to go study plus finish Wuthering Heights among the other millions of assignments I have to do. Later and update soon (although I shouldn't talk about updating since I haven't updated my story in like a million years but yeah...) Ciao.

I don't know if anyone has told you this already, but the name Samantha Spade is from a TV show called Without a Trace. Also, it's interesting that you mention that this story has nothing to do with Buffy the Vampire Slayer, because the main character loves the show. Interesting story so far.

Awesome chapter! Love the Buffy/Angel references as usual, mostly with the chapter title. I'm glad to see you like Cordy too. She was my favorite on Angel, and even though Season Five was awesome (because of Spike...ahem) I really missed her. She was the show's humor. Well, anyway, I could go on and on about my love for Angel and Cordy, but I'll stick to your story. I find it interesting that there is so much character development going on between Same and David again, especially with her getting sick. You can really see he cares for her, when she get sick and all. And despite the bickering between them, which I think is normal for them, I think they're both starting to soften to one another. It's awesome! I can't wait to read more!

Hahahaha! Once again you deliver excellence! I can't really decide whether Sam or David is my favourite...I relate better to David, but Sam's funnier. I was a little disappointed that there was no kiss...that makes two almost kisses only. But if they weren't both stubborn and proud it wouldn't be as entertaining.

So, she jealous of Laura, is she? I wonder if you can elaborate on this a bit in your next chapter. Exactly what is she jealous of? The other girls' looks, or is it that David seems to show an interest in Laura as well? And how exactly does he flirt with her? Details here!

But it is quite good, and I'm looking forward to more almost-kisses (or possibly a REAL one) sometime soon! Update!

Once again, I cannot say anything except how fantastic this story is. I couldn't help but add it to my favorites. Your sense of writing is unique as most authors who write first person do so in a very monotone way.

Example: she got up from her bed and went to her mirror. She put on clothes.

It's downright boring. But somehow you managed to avoid that trap. And as an author myself, I find myself often picking out the little things that could be changed in a story. It's a bad habit. But I have yet to find anything wrong with your story.

It's so very hard to find a quality story that is written well in first person but you have managed to do just that. Your other characters do not lack for want even though it is first person and in many stories like that, it tends to happen, and your sense of humanity that you are giving them is really what's pushing this story toward the other words, you have created more then mere characters in just another story. You created beings that can be related to, that the reader can feel for, and in a sense you have brought them to life, at least in the reader's imagination.

Very well done, and consider me one of your fans.

Well written and funny...nice job! I like your penname; I'm not really a Buffy fanatic - I've never really watched it, since the reruns are on really late at night, but you do a good job of referencing the...references. I need a thesaurus...can I borrow Sam's? lol...I like her name. Do you ever watch Without A Trace, 'cause there's a character on that named Samantha Spade - not that I think you plagiarized, or anything. I'm positive you didn't. They're clearly very different personalities, and it is an awesome name. Anyway, I'm definitely adding this to my favorites list, and I hope you update soon - you seem to be very satisfactory that way. Nice, entertaining characters, nice reworking of the plot, nice overall grammar and such - Good!

LMAO! that last line of his was hella funny and ...smooth kekeke! *sighz* i love this story ...it just cracks me and never bore me XD. well, i cant wait to read what's next ...i hope it's even more amusing and opening wid samantha/david's thoughts or emotions !

this story is so adorable! u gotta update soon

Great new chapter!

I am amazed that you find the time.

Keep up the good work,

* Books4mE *