Reviews for Want, Take, Have |
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a Leader by Default chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 Flippin' Great! Sorry I dont have time for long reviews, BUT it's SO flippin good ;) And of course, David, as my fave. character. Sexy little man! |
i am pookie chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 you have to update this story! RIGHT NOW! I absolutely love it. |
sweetxinsincerity chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 Another nice chap...aww i love david! so in response to your poll, he's my favorite character so far. I'm not sure why but I just really like him and the scenes between him and Sam are always great. So I guess that makes Sam my 2nd favorite character. The only slightly confusing part of this chapter was that I had completely forgotten who alan was...I thought sam's brother was scott. how old is alan again? I know you mentioned it somewhere at the beginning of the story. Oh and I liked how she ran into the tree, lol. That happened to me once. I don't remember if I started bleeding at all but I kinda fell to the ground and they thought I was unconscious and so they dragged me to the nurse and were like "omg! she has a concussion!" and then they asked me all these questions and I KNEW i didnt have one but they wouldn't believe me. it was kinda funny when i look back on it. I'm sad for sam, i hope she gets better! lol and im excited to read the next chappie... |
annicel chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 I saw this in my inbox last night, but didn't have a chance to read it because my damn computer is still out of commission. Stupid thing... Anyway, yeah, Serenity looks awesome. I think it's already out, so maybe I'll drag all my people down to the movie theater to see it. So, no tid-bits on Ian? You big mean head... Nah, just kidding. I wouldn't reveal those kinds of things either, so I understand. :o) Sam ran into a TREE? LMAO That's pretty freaking funny, chica. I loved this line "Post-secondary education is overrated." The Exorcism of Emily Rose really did traumitize you, didn't it? lol Hm... What else amused me in this chapter? Oh, I remember... all the near kiss scenes. Good job at keeping the mood up. Your angst and sexual tension skills are impeccable. :o) I also like that the nurse's name is Dr. Harris. Cute. Also, I can't believe I didn't notice this earlier, but you have Dave and Sam climbing through her window an awful lot. Now, what does that remind me of...? lol You're a trip... Who's my favorite character? That's hard... I guess I would have to go with the typical answer and say Sam. She reminds me so much of myself in some ways, and it's always nice to relate to a character, ya know? I also love her sharp wit, devotion to her school work, and loyalty to her friends. All her friends. Even David. He might irritate her, but you can tell that she would stand up by him if he really needed her. The scene with her and Allan in this chapter was also so sweet. It just made me like her more. Now, just out of curiosity, who is your favorite character in FFY and why? Good god, my reviews are always like four pages long. You better appreciate my babbling, girl! lol Ok, I guess I better get to work on my new chapter before people think I died or something. Great job (as always) and I can't wait to see what you have in store next... :o) |
gonzogrig chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 i'm liking this fic more every time I read it. you really are a wonderful writer. the almost-kiss was definitely interesting, plus the banter was superb as usual. keep it up, update asap |
sketchingaCYNiC chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 ooh! haha, i read the first chapter of "a little too late," and it's hilarious! especially when the princess gets . XD my favorite character is... perhaps davie. _ he's such a sweetheart. . aw. widdle alan's sick. and now sam's sick. tsk tsk. she's not very bright at times. ... and omg! i hate needles, too~ i had to get like 5 IVs for my surgery in 6th grade, it was horrible. blood tests are even worse... sticking that FAT needle in you and seeing it suck the life outta you. *shudder* XD aww. i loved the "sam-walks-into-a-tree-and-gets-hurt-and-then-dave-helps-her" scene. teehee. they're so cute. 'kay. i'mma email youse for the descriptions. D |
esereht chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 hhahhahaa! somebodys jealous of laura brennan! that was a great chap! it was so nice! update soon cant wait! |
Selena Brudi chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 good chapter! i really liked it... i have no other comments because it was really good... good luck with the next chapter, and i hope ya update soon! ~Mytical Luver~ |
Kat1989 chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 Thats a horrible response! Gah. Anyway, good chapter, please update soon. |
Mei1105 chapter 9 . 10/4/2005 Aww! Bless Sam's little cotton socks! Ugh! Being ill sucks doesn't it? Great Chapter! :) |
storywritergirl chapter 9 . 10/3/2005 Nice chapter. My face character(s) are David, Sam and Scott. Reason: They are all funny, make me laugh and I just...like them. Also, last chapter I forgot to mention to you how much i liked the line 'I'll save you a seat' which was David's response to Sam's 'Go to hell'. It was simple, but funny and i liked it. Yeah, now that ya mention it, Sam and David ARE quite similar. Oh! they were SO close to kissing, I could...umm...read it in their eyes? Damn, you like to keep all us reviewers hanging, don't ya? update soon. Cheers, storywritergirl xoxo |
Ann chapter 9 . 10/3/2005 She was SO ready for that kiss damnit! Excellent chapter by the way ;) Here's something I'd like to have you try since you're so good at writing. Usually the story ends after the characters get together, in which case...we can all say "aw" at the end of the story when they finally proclaim they're "undying love" for one another. But we can do nothing after that, we can only just think about what takes place after; Do they go through real life harsh times with their relationship? Do they break up? Is their relationships obstructed by another character? Do the characters screw up on dates? Do the characters change the way they act around one another just because they are going out now? It'd be neat to see how you portray Sam and David's relationship even after they get together (cause we all know they're going to ;)lol) Maybe if you add more plot to the story by developing some of the other characters, you could extend the reader's pleasure in seeing how they work out. Anyway, awesome story, you're on my favorites on my internet browser so i can skip all the hassel and get straight to the story, lol. Update soon please! I'm dying to know what happens! (And I think I speak for everyone when I say that) My favorite character would have to be David, because he's sarcastic and egotistical and hilarious with his attempts to make Sam admit she likes him. Take CareAnn |
alexialynne chapter 9 . 10/3/2005 aw! I love this! It was so fun to read.. all the humour love. woah... :) Alan? I thought it was about Scott really... hm.. ok.. er, I love the part where she walked into the tree. ahahhaha. funny...really funny. I love...everything! oh, and she walked into the wrong bathroom? AHahhahahaHAHAHHAAHAH. lol... omg... I like David a LOT in this chapter. I like both of them a LOT in this chapter actually. Maybe because its more of a flirting sorta sarcasm then the usual go-to-hell sorta sarcasm. I dont know how to describe it exactly, but this chapter was really fun.. very very good job. :) and Which character do I like most? err.. I can't decide between Sam and David.. Previously, up to this point, I liked Sam better. But in this chapter, David was so sweet and cute. :D Love both of them. As for the other characters..can't really say. Havnt seen much of them around. I love the Ian mystery? Oh, I think I'll love AL the mysteries in your story. Fab job! Keep it up!HugZ |
Claire-a-bell chapter 9 . 10/3/2005 Ah, mystery solved. Yes, I stayed up late to read this. Yes, I'm not going to get to bed till almost 1 even though it's a school night. And yes, it was worth it. So I'm officially in love with Alan. He is beyond cute with Sam, particularly while sick. I like that Sam can do stupid things sometimes too, ie, walking into a tree and taking her mask off when she knew her brother was sick. I'm still trying to decide if the Buffy references (big fan as well, by the way. Have you watched that new show Bones? David Boreanaz wasn't hot towards the end of Angel, but on the second episode of Bones they showed him with his shirt off *heh* Let me just say it's worth watching if they do a repeat performance)... Where was I... Oh yeah, so I'm not sure if the Buffy references make the universe more believably or less for some reason, but I rather enjoy her random obsession. Keep up the good work. |
TopazDragon chapter 9 . 10/3/2005 *twitchs* Hehehehe nice update, I love David so much. I think my fav character although is Sam. 'Cause she is the main character. Update soon again or i'll have to hurt you. Lol. |