Right, so I'm a moron about the name thing. David, duh! And Sarah... and probably a lot of others I should just look up now and save myself the embarrassment. How'd it take me 13 chapters to catch on?

As always, banter amazing. The story is, however, dragging a bit. I mean, I've read 13 chapters, but what's really happened? Sam and David have grown closer, I suppose. But other than that...?

Still good job! I've got about a bizillion things I should be doing now, but instead I'm just going to keep reading.

So far so good. You've got the adorable fluff stuff down to a solid art. Following a bit of a predictable plot though- we'll see, I guess. It's still great!

I loved the she-mantis reference! :)

So I have a weird question. Is there significance to the names? Wheston is awfully similar to Whedon, lol. And I have this sneaking suspicion about Leah Green. Seriously, it involves a one letter switcheroo and you've got something totally awesome if it was on purpose. I wonder if anyone else has noticed? I didn't see any mention of it on your profile so I won't mention it here...

Anyway great job so far! Thank you for writing, and keep it up!

Hello! I stumbled upon your story by looking at a website called serendipity 13, that happens to have a lot of good stories. I haven't even read a word of your story yet, but I am so looking forward to reading it because...

1. I love Joss! My cousin showed me Buffy at the beginning of last year, and I became obsessed... and kinda finished all of Buffy and Angel in a two month period. So I am super excited that you have an amazing influence.

2. You promised to finish the story. You don't know how many stories I read around here (actually, you might) that are great but the authors have just given up on! Thank you! I know the feeling of being overloaded... I've had this story planned out and I've been writing it for two years, and will probably continue for more because it just takes so long with college and all...

Anyway, good luck! Now to actually go start...

Well! Somehow or the other it happens that I'm writing a story and I get the sudden urge to write "But I digress" which reminded me that I had to post a review here.

I like your story alot. Complete it soon...

love it

Can't wait to see the rewrite!

hey there, kinda keep us hanging there huh? just read this story and didn't stop until i finished it, but it ain't finished yet... hope you can update this! can't wait to read the ending... will ian die? who's the father of madison's baby? will david and sam and end up happly ever after, of corz they should haha. more power! more updates!

beautifully written , love it !

I love this story, please finish!

The French in this was right on, and I was so happy I could understand about half of it. Way to go French II! haha This story is so god. Found it on ADropOfRomeo, and it's really good. Well, I need to keep reading this, so... yeah. :)

So excited for the next chapter, CLIFFHANGER

I love you, love your writing, no pressure for the next chapter but dont give up on this, its amazing :D

Thanks a million

This story has been added to When You Were Young’s February list.

First of all: AH.

I love your story. Love it love it love it.

I'm only on chapter four, but it's really good.

The summary is very deep. I love all of the characters!

I love this story!

Peace,

Bubbly Girl

Hi there!

I just read your story cover-to-cover (or first chapter to the last posted), and I'm amazed. It seems like it's slightly disorganized though; the problems came..what, at the 29th chapter? It seemed more of a sappy high school romance cliche in the beginning, so that really surprised me.

Anyway, I'm waiting anxiously for your rewrite/update :)