Reviews for The End of the Sky
kayttea chapter 3 . 5/16/2006
i had forgotten how cool this story was! dundundun. no cement. o. lol. thanks for your review on the phsycotic story... yeah. maybe johnny shalle be in the next chapter! if there is one... ha. we should make him appear. anyways! this is an awesome story... oh my gosh there isn't another chapter! NO! ah. you have to update! or else... johnny will never return... mwhahahahaha!
florida chapter 3 . 5/13/2006
Dum dum dum... drum roll please!

You know I hate cliffhangers Lindsey! GR double GR triple GR!

I'm mad now! I mean how do you expect me to go to sleep with this chapter stuck in my mind.

All right now don't worry, I know your terribly conserned, but I have a solution... you can simply write the next chapter tonight so I can go to sleep with out all those questions that are left unasked in this chapter.

How's that sound? Pretty good eh?

florida
Never Knows Best chapter 3 . 4/16/2006
Yay! I've been looking forward to this chapter! Fun, fun, fun! Cionna and Sierra are going to find dragons! Whee!As per the quotes, most of them are things I've heard in life. The nerd wannabe one was from me. I don't know when I came up with it but it amused me greatly. The one about the car relaxing is something a friend of a friend of mine said on graduation night after smoking a considerable amout of marijuana (kids these days) and the third is something else I heard, probably from someone...I don't remember , looking forward to more -NKB
writtenreality chapter 2 . 10/31/2005
i think the bits at the beginning are brilliant, definitely keep tham and that was a fab chapter!

xx
kayttea chapter 2 . 10/8/2005
another awesome chapter. you are still working on this story aren't you? cause I really like it. it's funny. ) I like Cionna and Sierra both... tho I think I could probably related more to Cionna. Is Sierra going to make up with Tara or is that like over? I dunno you just didn't mention her in this chapter. I like the list things you did at the top of each chapters.

anyway update, this is awesome!

-'kiti
kayttea chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
ha! this is awesome! its funny and I love it already. Cade is a very cool name. you described the people on the bus perfectly; how they were either half dead or useing their CD players as their life source. it describes my bus perfectly at least. and I mean PERFECTLY. i really like the humor, and the list at the top was cool to.

i have a confession to make. i can't snap my fingers either. maybe they're...mutated. hehheh. I like that word. anyways.

my poems that you just reviewed- I have decided to update! either today in a couple minutes or tomorrow. )

off to the next chapter!

-'kiti
Never Knows Best chapter 2 . 9/30/2005
Hee hee, I love the use of the first quote. Cionna is cute She reminds me a bit of myself. I'm looking forward to the next chapter !
SapphireIris chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
Where are the dragons? Oh, yeah, I think I like Sierra better, but I can't know that yet, I think... you need to update more. Hey, I reviewed. That's a big accomplishment. And one more thing... about the strawberries and chocolate...

-SapphireIris
BlackFireyPhoenix86 chapter 2 . 9/20/2005
I loved this chapter... Mostly because of the quote, I think you did it great justices, because you introduced it into the story..

And as for your question of "Which character do you find more likeable hence far, Cionna or Sierra?" I can't really say right now..

I like them both right now..

Keep up the great work _... I can't wait for the next chapter..
florida chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Linz this is really good, I will personaly make sure that you continue. If you don't it wont be my fault that a crazed fan came in to your in the middle of the night and murdered you in your sleep.

Right Well heres the only mistake that I found:

mistake 1: “So… how is your going morning so far, ladies?” Cade asked. I think that you ment to say 'So... how is your morning goinig...' you get the point.

I really liked these part it was funny and sounds, to me, a lot like something that you would say.

1: “Tara, you are aware that your maturity has yet to exceed that of a four-year-old boy obsessed with underwear?”2: “And for your information, Tara, I didn’t steal the window seat. I just got there first.”

Yup so see ya later, and great job I'm really hooked!

florida
c4rm3n chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
To learn how to snap her fingers.

Haha, that's such a cute, quirky line.

Love what you've written, i can't wait until there ARE dragons.. sounds brilliant.

see you
BlackFireyPhoenix86 chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
I like this story.. and those quotes are soo funny.. I love the one that goes, "Did you know that strawberries are a aphrodisiac? So is chocolate. So if you eat Strawberries and chocolate you'll be like...ultra horny." that is just to funny.. I have to some one that and see what they say.. I can't wait for the next one.. keep up the good work..
Never Knows Best chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Yay! I love it already! Can I lick you? No really, I mean it...Okay, I'll stop being weird now. Looking forward to another chapter (and dragons!)