Reviews for That Kat |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i just want to say that i think you are an amazing writer ! this was one of the first stories i read here on fictionpress and i never forgot about it ! yes it was that good ! it is y favourite storie ! great work :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good cliffhanger at the end :) You did a nice job on this first chapter. |
![]() ![]() This is a pretty good story so far, although it is a bit cliched. I think one of the main problems is that you haven't really gone too in depth with their characters, they're more flat than round. Also, you tend to subtly switch between 1st and 3rd person, but only occasionally. Good job and keep working. |
![]() ![]() wow..that was so cute! omg! it was a very thrilling story that totally kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time! wow...fantastic! keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say that I absolutely LOVED this story. Not once was I bpred with the plot, the romance was awesome and so was the angst. I have NO idea why th amount of reviews is a low number. You did a great job with this, and you should have more than double of your reviews. Loved it. Keep writting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice journey of character development! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked the story especially the last chapter but it did feel like it was rushed a bit because everythign happened a bit too fast that it wasnt believable but it was likeable x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I really liked your story. It was very sweet and timese suspenseful. I really enjoyed getting to know your characters. They seemed so real. I'll be sure to put you on my author alert. I only have only question. What did they fight over in the second grade. I really, really want to know. lol. :) Anyways, Bye. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Coolies, they're both up now. I have suspicians..don't know if they are true or not however...Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 9 reviews when you came back? I envy you :p Well the chapter was loveliness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh. This chapter is making me feel cold! :p Its cold where I live about now. I would hate to die in a freezer. I would freak out too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god. Freezing much. Wonder how they will get out? Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, how chivalrous of him. Sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! My brothers aren't that overprotective lol. Well they would kick someones ass if I TOLD them to, but otherwise they will leave me alone with it. I would freak out if attacked by a hand while I was changing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is by far one of the best fictionpress romances i've read in a while. good job. ] |