ah. :) so cute, young love.

HeY! This is a good story! I'm glad to have found it.

I think you can work on your pace a bit more; there are times when things are being rushed or simply dragged out.

And I think your first 3 chapters were really well written, but chap. 4 needs a bit more tweaking.

Other than that, good luck and a great start to a good story!

What I think is that I'm totally loving this story so far. :) You've got the supposed arch-nemesis doing kind things for her, and now after they've made up, there's the possibility that she might lose him. Much of the angst, much of the goodness.

And man, what's with Norm? I hope you don't let that little plotline disappear. And who pulled the shoe out (Norm?)? How did they even get found? Man, cliffhangers and questions abound. I should also add that I like how you slipped in that little detail about her foot being wrapped in gauze. I know that the frostbite thing is a little but important detail that many others would have overlooked. It's the little things that show you how good of a writer an author really is.

And am I right in saying you're a "Buffy" fan? I mean, Josh *Whedon*... anyways, this story is so going on my favourites, and girl, you better update soon! :)

i totally understand how kat feels. well, i haven't exactly gotten someone in a coma or anything, but it seemed kinda bad to me. it's really good, so keep on writing!

Wow, poor Josh...poor Kay too but atleast she's awake. This is really interesting and I can't wait to see what will happen next. Please keep up the good work with this. Again, this chapter was really good!

-sniff sniff- That's so sad! I feel so bad for them, especially Josh. He needs to wake his ass up... Anyhoo, you're welcome for the reviews. I'm glad that you 'squealed' at that sight of them. lol Good chap. Looking forward to more...

Great chapter as usual. It has so much great emotion and I'm glad to find out what happend with them. It's really sad about Josh and I can't wait to see how you develop this further, and I wonder if he's going to blame her if he gets better. Awesome job! Keep up the good work.

*laughs* I like this! Please..continue. I like your sense of humor.

LMAO! I loved your author's note. You're a trip... Yes, there was a bit of corny-ness evident in this chapter, but I suppose I can forgive due to the impending hypothermia and possible death. :o) Cool twist. A gold star for you.

Uh-oh... Someone definitely has it out for those two... But what an excellent situation for the two of them to find ways to 'warm' themselves... lol

“Man stance spectacle” Hehehe... That made me giggle, and for some reason picture Peter Pan. o_O Very intriguing chapter. I don't think Josh hates Kat as much as she thinks he does and the whole camera thing was... interesting. Looks like we might have a perv on our hands... Hm...

Moving on...

Ok, first before I review this chapter, I have to respond to one of the dislikes posted on your profile. Jelly on garlic toast is indeed, the grossest thing ever. I work at a resturant and that kinda crap happens all the time. Sorry for the randomness, I just read that, chuckled, and felt the need to share.

Anyhoo, moving on... I'm really liking this story so far. I just can't enough of the rivals becoming lovers plot line. I get so addicted. I like how you pay close attention to details such as the character's clothing and their enviroment. It gives the story depth and helps me get a clear picture of what's going on. Great job on that. Kat (great name, I love it)is very interesting and funny. Her interactions with her brothers were very realistic and amusing. The burping thing cracked me up... The cliff hanger was also a nice touch. It's always good to leave your readers wanting more.

Awesome so far, on to chapter two..

Aw...excellent chapter. But there you go with those cliffhangers again. I'll be looking forward to more.

Interesting twist! Oh man, I'm really loving this story. Don't be so hard on yourself. This chapter was written just fine.

Wow. Interesting bit with the camera. I smell something sneaky in Norm's intention. As usual, you've done a wonderful job at keeping me interested in this.