i just wanna say that i think you're an awesome writer and this is now one of my fave stories on FP!

FANTASTIC

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Oh, so cute! I love it.

amazing job

Nice story. It is really well written, the plot is great, and you never dragged things on, or rushed things, and it wasn't overly dramatic like the story i read before i read your story. I hate it when you can't relate to the main characters and i am happy to say your characters are really easy to relate to. I am really happy to read a complete story cause I have little patience, ecspecially when it comes to my favourite fictionpress stories. My bad patience and incomplete stories do not go well together!

It's a bittersweet ending but I like it all the same (: Honestly, the whole freezer thing was just plain scary and totally more serious than most of the Romance/Comedy fics on ficitionpress... but that's probably hence, the differing genre it's under :x Anyways, yeah. I think the ending could have been dragged out just a little longer, namely the last chapter, because in some sense, you had all this description and then it's just kind of like summary but I guess that you could also argue that none of the details were really that important. I'm assuming that Kat came back home to find her father passed away... in a way, it was kind of implied.

But I like how you ended it just there. It was a nice touch, you know. Not really thinking into the future, or about any problems in the world they may have to deal with, or things like Kat's father etc. etc. and just... focus on the present. What they have at that exact moment. And are still able to apperciate just that. I don't know, I liked it a lot :)

Aw. They're super cute together. I always love those couples where haters turn to lovers... simply because the relationships end up being so much more real. Yeah, I don't know. Nice job :) I guess they never went back to Dino's. And Kat never got her T-rex hat ;) Haha just kidding.

Keep up the good work!

-Alyssa

Oh my goodness! I just realized what a dork I am, I only reviewed for you for like the last 4 chapters! I'm very sorry for that. I so suck... but this story, this story rocked! I'm sad that it's over but it was very good and you are now going on my fave author's list for sure! Yay!

aww.. how sweet. :)

Wait a minute. Hold up here. At first, I was freaking out 'cause they exchanged the L word. Then I was all "aw" in the bittersweet way, when Josh met Kat's dad. Then I was all "aw" in the romantic sentimental way, when he brought her to the football field, and when they fell asleep and woke up together.

But you know what I'm REALLY freaking out about?

The story's OVER! I can't believe it! How? You, my dear, did NOT tell us you were ending the story! I went back to the last four chapters and checked the A/Ns, and there was no mention of ending the story! I suppose I should have known, though. As I was reading the chapter, I felt like a lot of things were being tied up. It wasn't until I read the last two words that I was like, 'No, Danni can't be doing this.' And then I checked your A/N, and yep, story over. Am still reeling from the shock of it, but most of it's worn off, and yeah, I can see that it was a really fitting ending. It was sweet. :)

Congrats on doing such a great job with this story, for making these interesting characters that we were able to learn and care about. Overall, it was a brilliant story, and I had a blast reading it. ;)

- Sabrina

Woo, wonderful story. The end was kind of abrupt, and you still didn't tell everyone what's wrong with her dad. anyways, keep writing !

Don't have much time for a nice, long review, unfortunately, but good chapter. :) Hope to see another one soon. ;)

that was a great chapter

okay... who forgets 911? NO ONE, god wtf that was so unbelievable. and they already know where you're at and what number you're calling from when you call. the police and 911 people are acting very unrealistic. i know people always think "oh, they wont believe the seriousness of the situation" or "we're just kids" but that's their JOB, and if they didn't take every little thing seriously, they'd have a lot of hurt or dead people that they could have helped. and you're still writing like a grandma, although the fact that Josh said "fuck" means its getting just a LITTLE better. no teanagers run around spouting big words and never cussing like Josh and Kat do in this story.

its a good story, but you're writing so... eloquently and trying to sound smart or whatever, and its making everything sound so STUPID! you know, it IS possible to write a good story without sounding like a robot. or an accountant.

and by the way, have you ever been in a freezer in like an ice cream parlor or fast food place? they aren't cold at all! i dont know how the food stays frozen, but it does. plus, most ice cream places keep their icecream in room temperature places, and when they run out, they take the liquid ice cream and replace it and it freezes up pretty quick. next time you go to dairy queen, ask to see their extra stuff BEFORE they put it in the machines. it's like a big bag of warm milk.

so yeah. quit trying to sound so smart and grownup when you write, it reminds me of my grandma.