Ello! Nice poem. Figures it'd be a religious one! See you on Saturday, you'd better be there!

Wow, godgirl...that was really powerful. I have to say, at first I didn't really like what you were doing with just a 'What would you say' and then a quistion becuase I thought it was shallow writing. In the end you tied it together very nicely...I really like it. Just shows simple things can be powerful...keep writing. I hope you do decide to post more of your poetry. God Bless, silent.