|Reviews for Wyndriders|
| Dracona In Volata chapter 2 . 11/28/2005
Very interesting. I like it. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what you have up your sleeve.
| J. N. Laerasyn chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
I can't wait for you to get working more on this! It's great. Two things, though: one, you refered to Tobias as Luc a few times. Two, and this isnt really criticism as much as a mild suggestion, you kind of gave away a lot of info in the conversation with the two "cloaked men." I don't know if there's just no other way or whatever, but it might sound a bit more natural if they didnt speak about some things so openly. Just a thought. Get busy!
| Neaera chapter 2 . 9/17/2005
I love your style, descriptive and well written. Love it! Keep it up!
| Lccorp2 chapter 2 . 9/11/2005
At school now, tagging this so I can give this a proper CC once I get home.
Expect to see the Devourer soon for another review.
| Arune chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
WOW! this is excellent. it reads like a real novel, though the dialogue is a little weak. the conversation between the two cloaked characters is a little-er- unbelievable and jagged. Obviously you just wanted to get all the information in but it sort of corrupts the otherwise fantastically smooth flow of the story. Who is luc? did you change his name and just miss a few? if it's any suggestion i like the name luc better then Tobias (and hey! it takes less effort to write too!) hahaha anyways i am adding this to my favorites list. well done and keep it coming! just reread your dialogue
| Neaera chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Hm... sounds very promiseing so far! Keep it up!