Reviews for Flight
BlackFireyPhoenix86 chapter 4 . 10/29/2005
A gremlin? I would have never guess that was the creature that was watching them in chapter 3... I for one can't wait to see Arvan secrets...

Great story, and great chapter...

I can't wait until the next chapter comes out...

Keep up the great work... _

And Happy Halloween..
Queen Beryl chapter 4 . 10/29/2005
WOW. I LOVE this chapter. The descriptions, the attitude, the behavior, the snide remarks... I love it all! You did a wonderful job on this chapter. Absolutely amazing. UPDATE soon!
Instant Ninja chapter 4 . 10/29/2005
...hello again!

...I love how this story's going...your character interactions are hilarious!

...*hugs*...until next time, chica!

-WLFI-
Mya von Dor chapter 4 . 10/29/2005
interesting, though I'm surprised she wasn't wondering earlier, what with those people after him and everything...though it'll be intersting for sure to find out his secrets...
Rayfield Noland chapter 4 . 10/29/2005
all i can really say is...WOW. For a story you put together as a project, so far, it is put together and blends better than most of the fantasy novels i've bought at the bookstore. This is really good. i look forward to the next chapter!
Hell's first Icicle chapter 4 . 10/28/2005
l0lz. great story! ah... so many secrets. i cant wait to read more!
Instant Ninja chapter 3 . 10/12/2005
...yay! ...*happydances*...

...ok, now that I'm done with that...

...*glomps*...you updated! ...I love your stories so mush...they have all this life and stuff...

...so...yay!

...um...ok...until next time, hasta!

-With Love, From Ikari-
Creative Destruction chapter 3 . 10/12/2005
Update! Like NOW please?
Mage Dudette chapter 3 . 10/12/2005
lol! meep! new travelling companion i wonder? hmm.. _
Mya von Dor chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
hmm...interesting end...interesting chapter, really...but I have to say, and maybe this is just me and I don't know what I'm talking about, but the constant bickering between the two is, well, not forced, but...well, I guess what I'm trying to say is that I hope they don't keep doing that all the way through...again, might just be me, but good stuff, anyway!
Raomina chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
Wow, you updated! Great chapter. You commenced the start of their adventure and created more mystery about Arvan. So that's why he can talk to dragons, huh? He wasn't human! I love Shanae's bossy attitude; she sounds adorable. However, I still can't really picture her. Does she look exactly like a human except with wings? Update soon.
BlackFireyPhoenix86 chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
Great chapter.. I loved it... I love how they argue all the time..

I can't wait to see what Happens next and to see what was the creature that was smelling them...

Keep up the good work.. _
BadSweets chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
CLIffhaNGer! So what happens next?

Hmm, I liked their interactions a lot and learned a little bit about them and a destination was set.. . but a slow chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Kura-sama chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
Ahh Cliffhanger! What is the creature that is checking him out? Update soon . I'm dying of curiosity!
Queen Beryl chapter 3 . 10/11/2005
Whoot! Finally, another chapter! Yay! I'm so excited! I love the dragon! He's my favorite! His attitude is hilarious! His snide remarks... so awesome!

The creature is also interesting. There seems to be a big lack of description on it, though. Is that to be saved or was it done on purpose? Either way, I can't wait to read what happens next! Great job and update soon!
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