Whoa! Cool. I want to know where this is going XD Poor Shanae. I wonder when she's going to tell him she can't fly?

I love it! I love it! I LOVE IT! Oh, this is one of the most original... most flyingly wonderful stories I've read! I love it so much! It's my newest favorite! Oh, thank you so much for doing such a great job!

*gushes* It's beautiful! I absolutely love it so far! You've done such a wonderful job! *hugs* It's so lovely! I love how Shanae can't fly! I ADORE Arvan! Hehehe, he's such a dork! The dragon is amazing as well! Way to go!

SAWEET!

Omg! Omg! Omg! I love this story! Wow. It's SO good. This is A-Train btw. I changed my name. But neways, ack! You HAVE to update! I absolutely LOVE the dragon and you describe him really well. And when you described him sitting down I imagined him looking all adorable and stuff. Ha ha. So yeah, update! This story is DEFINETELY going on my favorites.

yay! new story! ...*hugs*...yay!

...now I feel like a 3 year old...oh, well...it's a cool idea for a story...although...a lot hasn't been explained yet, but that's ok...just...keep on with it,ok?

...*sniff*...I liked those incomplete stories...bad authoress! BAD! ...oh, well...good luck with everything, k?

-With Love, From Ikari-

oi, another great story! shanae and arvan are both, like, adults, right? im so used to the teenager thing. still, the action really wins over. keep updating!

p.s. is there a prize in the ficathon? because you have to answer to a challenge/assignment, right, so what do you get in return for the story you wrote for the challenge?

me like, me like!

~dragonfly

LOL! this was fun! i liked it! dragons are cool!

What a truly wonderful chapter! I enjoyed this very much - especially the suspense towards the end that had me all, "GAH!"

*Hugs Faeron* I love him. He's so cute.

AND! "Faeron tilted his head to the flames and seemed to study them for a moment. It is delightfully warm, isn’t it?" - Bwahaha!

AND! "I don’t want to be slain! Faeron whined." - *Grins*

Nice use of your challenge quote - very creative. I can't believe Shanae maneuvered herself around the subject of her not being able to fly. I'm desperate to see Arvan and Faeron's reactions. Also! Arvan...what *is* he? What sort of species would be able to understand the language of dragons?

Update soon! I'm really enjoying this!

McQuinn

wow this is awesome, u gotta continue it i wanna read more

Another great story! I just hope you'll finish this one...

Interesting... Very interesting. But you gotta finish some of your other stories to a point. You've realeased several in the past couple of months but still havn't updated that far in any. It's hard to keep up with all of them.

i like it

this is good.. I really like.. can't wait for the next chapter...