|Reviews for Under the Canopy of Trees|
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
very well written. trees seem to be a perfect spot for romantic stuff. I've seen it so many times! lol great work!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
such comfort in this one! such strenght!
| jessyxyz chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
Your line "Softly guard us..." was good except I think the "outside spies, bees, and humans" ruined the flow a bit. Maybe you could shorten it to "outside spies"? Also the "Canopy of Trees, underneath, besides us" confused me. I thought they were under the trees... Anyways, this poem was good, and keep writing! Jessica
| Unknown Unnamed chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Oh. Gosh. I really need to get up the courage and tell the guy I've been after how I feel.
THIS is what I want in a relationship. Beautiful, poetic bliss!
We cannot ever get what we want.
Just a good review once in a while.
Which this was.
Lovely, lovely poem.
| Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Aw that is so sweet!
fyi, your poem 'save me' , i wrote a poem to my crush called 'save me' ! quinkine dope! (;
WRITE ON! (;
| simpletonsgrin chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
sweet and short- just what i needed. Anyways, good job, and keep it up.