Reviews for Save Me
HauntedMisery chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
This is very good, great job!
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
hm..quite tragic to my opinion. so well written and you had very good description in the ending. very good!

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account not in use chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Breathtaking. Wonderful, very angsty-ish and very...defiant, maybe?
Lady Hoshi chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
First, thanks for the review. Now about your poem, you paint the picture so beautifully. A good twist to an old tale.
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
I like the imagery and this is a very beautiful piece. Really liked it! QueenVixta
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
hey hey! of course imma review you! id never forget! just went on a noreviewing/nowriting hiatus for a bit... lol. sorries! but imma catch up now. i like this, cept for that first line thats left justified. i dunno, seemes just odd there all by itself. but then again its about the poem not the look of it. so anyhoo, a nice concept and beautiful words!
writerR chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
excellent poem, very interesting
xpoisonedx chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
wow...O_O thats like...how I feel sometimes...nice. Good job and keep writin!
poetrypal chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
wow. LOVE it. really i do. very, very good. i don't really know what else to say...
Whisper on the Lips chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
OMG! this is soo cool! is this the POV of the wicked queen? a good twist on her motives and greed. still she's got to be a little psycho to wanna kill some one just for their looks. seriously. well, girlfriend (girly meaning), WRITE ON!(