Reviews for Serpent
Moonjava chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Oh, I like it. A very unique perspective.
Siren's Paene chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
This poem has its own unique rhythm, and you waste no words to express the subtle message in it.

I particularly love the last part of your poem, and agree with it, be it literally or figuratively.
Isis ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 8/17/2005
I like this poem. It has excellent rhythm.

My mom is convinced that snakes are evil...
Learah Kaelar chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
This is awesome! I absolutely love it! It's talking about the snake from the bible, right? YOu've actually managed to capture what I feel every time I hear all the crap that people have against wiccans and pagans and stuff...they're convinced we're evil...very curious. Anyway...GREAT POEM!*Adds to favorites list*Blessed be!
Thornberry chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
So damn true! Just because you are different, does not mean you are evil.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Yes, true.
DathomiranSciFiAuthor chapter 1 . 8/10/2005
Wonderful poem! Love how it flows.